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Omg.... I am absolutely in LOVE with this!Alright so this is when Thunderpaw was making her first journey to the moonstone with Firelight. When she met StarClan for the first time, she got a vision of the Camp being attacked...
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page-mage [2014-09-28 05:17:45 +0000 UTC]
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Wonderful Job though possibly you could have worked on the running stance, not that i could top it but just saying. Great job I love the sunset and emotion. The colors are beautifully vivid, maybe just a tad predicted pattern, but it still looks very nice. eyes are a bit too glowy. Glowing eyes are good but they seem a bit too glowy here. Fur and outlines are very nice. If I were you I would put in one or two battle wounds or maybe a bruise but since they are getting used to being in clans I guess they wouldn't have too many. Great work keep it up!
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SplashARooni [2014-09-28 03:22:43 +0000 UTC]
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This picture looks great! much better than anything i could ever do! it reminds me of this one story my friend was trying to write but never finished. i just have one question... who is who? its probably really clear, but im a weirdo, so i get a bit confused when it comes to the obvious. wait, i have another question... are these cats OC's? it sounds like they are, but im just making sure. i guess thats all i have to say for now... Peace Out And Splash On! :3 [PS. Goodbye! And keep on drawing! you're really good!]
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dr--thunder In reply to SplashARooni [2014-09-28 03:25:11 +0000 UTC]
The Grey striped cat is Thunderpaw and the Orange patched Tabby is Firelight. And yes,,, yes they are OC ^-^
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page-mage In reply to dr--thunder [2014-09-28 05:20:39 +0000 UTC]
Opps i'm so stupid In my review I thought they were from the new books since I didn't read them. Ignore one of my review's sentances because it's wrong. Sorry Thunderstar6622
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SplashARooni In reply to dr--thunder [2014-09-28 03:26:25 +0000 UTC]
Lol ok! they look amazing! :3
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