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I know it kind of sucks but I'm still learning, please critique me I need to get better.Related content
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veinsrunempty [2008-10-25 01:53:33 +0000 UTC]
I realize I'm not exactly a paper and pencil artist, but I'll offer my two cents anyway. I think the first thing to do is work the body a bit more. The wings need a bit of shading work, but they're essentially there, not bad with those. the body is just a bit hard to understand, maybe it's the angle, but I can't tell if he's shirtless and those are abs and he's got a collar on and he's wearing...slacks? or if he's just wearing a sweater? So I think adding a bit of detail of to the the torso and outfit will help. Ahh, the feet are baffling to me. Is he wearing sandals? Are those talons? I take offense to the idea of a dragon wearing flip-flops, just draw in some talons and make sure you heavy the bottom line to distinguish it. Hope that helps some mate; would love to see a reworked ink version of this. It's a funny concept.
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DracosStarlight In reply to veinsrunempty [2008-10-25 20:33:03 +0000 UTC]
omg...thank you soo much
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veinsrunempty In reply to DracosStarlight [2008-10-25 22:48:40 +0000 UTC]
sure thing. you've definitely got potential, and it will really start to show once you work on detailing, mate. A picture is the sum of it's parts. Glad to help.
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veinsrunempty In reply to DracosStarlight [2008-10-26 03:43:26 +0000 UTC]
sure, and I'd be glad to give specific pointers on other ones if you give me links or titles.
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DracosStarlight In reply to veinsrunempty [2008-10-26 14:48:51 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much
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Kiogry [2008-10-24 01:37:58 +0000 UTC]
thry adding some horns or ears, perhaps you could make the neck a bit shorter too.
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Kiogry In reply to DracosStarlight [2008-10-24 01:48:20 +0000 UTC]
sure like to see it when you've improved it.
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DracosStarlight In reply to Kiogry [2008-10-24 01:53:54 +0000 UTC]
ok, cool, talk to you later
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50calWolf [2008-10-24 01:36:05 +0000 UTC]
lol interesting, the coat could prob use more detail
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DracosStarlight In reply to 50calWolf [2008-10-24 01:45:20 +0000 UTC]
the coat?, he's only wearing a shirt
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50calWolf In reply to DracosStarlight [2008-10-24 01:49:08 +0000 UTC]
what's the thing on the chair ^^
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DracosStarlight In reply to 50calWolf [2008-10-24 01:53:39 +0000 UTC]
the thing off his shoulders is his wings, I know they suck, i'm working all tomorrow to improve them
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