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Published: 2011-10-05 08:28:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description acryl, cardboard
50x60cm
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Comments: 3

MammaMuffin [2011-10-10 21:08:24 +0000 UTC]

You are very welcome, it was just my opinion i said as i saw kind of thing im happy to help

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MammaMuffin [2011-10-05 12:10:09 +0000 UTC]

excelent work! The apples and pears see you!

the only thing that bothers me is the horizon i find the grey there too distracting , a better idea would be to have it a very pale blue going to nothing at the horizon, the idea is distance is pale going to darker as you get to the foreground , hope that helps!

Wonderful work!

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Draftman In reply to MammaMuffin [2011-10-09 21:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!
Painting the apples I was unsure what to do with the background. A simple colour, a landscape, what kind of sky or a background which fits in the "story". At last I wanted a "story". I intended a kind of distraction. Thinking about your comments, a sky more hazy could be an improvement.
Thank you for your viewpoint. It helps!

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