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Published: 2018-11-14 14:51:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description tell me, stranger:
have we met
before?
have we kissed
on darkened
streets
surrounded by the
smell of
fear and petrol?

I cannot remember
the texture of
your lips. the
road underneeth
my feet is
more familiar.

tell me, darling:
have we talked
before?
shared words
under lamplights
at two a.m.?

I cannot remember
the sound of
your voice. the
humming of
the moths is
almost deafening.
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Comments: 2

Vlodz [2018-11-20 22:49:00 +0000 UTC]

I do not read much poetry as of late (takes too much concentration and i hate to be concentrated  ), but i read yours and i do enjoy it, just for your information
I didn't want to suggest any titles (sort of scary to mess with somebody's else creation), but word 'Strangerness' popped up uninvitedly so i'm just passing it to you. Hope you won't call poem that  

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dragonfuture In reply to Vlodz [2018-12-05 20:36:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it
Hahaha I will keep it in mind, but personally I'm not sure whether it fits for me. That's really on me, not on you. Thank you for letting me know though, it means a lot!

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