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Published: 2017-03-05 20:25:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 179; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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sidelong gazes,
tense shoulders,
fingers that linger
too long
for comfort.

murmured whispers
in the darkness,
crossed legs
nerves, nerves,
fear?

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what happens in a world
where one
doesn't take 'no'
for an answer?

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Comments: 6

Snowy2525 [2017-03-05 20:36:56 +0000 UTC]

hmmmmmmm......... 

dunno, YOU are a teacher, you should know. I KNOW. (though I am no teacher...) 

a little punch in the face would make the "no" be heard better. see? 

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dragonfuture In reply to Snowy2525 [2017-03-05 21:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Well, this piece isn't at all about teaching, and I am not (always) a teacher in my spare/free time... plus I'm a very nonviolent person...

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Snowy2525 In reply to dragonfuture [2017-03-05 22:13:47 +0000 UTC]

I KNOW that, of course... 

I have been a "non-violent person" for thirty years, and that have been thirty years TOO much... it just got me into the deepest trouble, you can imagine  

and thank the universe I STOPPED IT, I will use violence now, when violence is APPROPRIATE ... do you get the point now?

I used to be the kind of "best man a woman could wish for" ... and I still AM. I am even better than before... if one may ever touch my beloved ones (in an "inappropriate way")  it will be the VERY day s/he will regret until his/her days on that godleft planet are counted  

see?

I guess you do. You are a teacher, you are SMART, and of course you do NOT have to tell it to your pupils then, but I can tell it to YOU, as an adult, as a "grown up". THIS world, we live in, will eat you up alive. It will spit you out then, afterwards, and you will have NOTHING AT ALL left. So you better start to rethink - HIT before you get hit yourself - you do not deserve that - you are beautiful - you are lovely - you are wonderful - you are YOU - and so ... DEFEND YOURSELF! gosh... I am still polite, I always was - but I will never ever let someone be "fukking" me - NO - and if I go to jail again, I don't care  

learnt your lesson now - teacheress? 

I HOPE you did. for I spent like ten minutes of my precious life to write that one - ONLY FOR YOU

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dragonfuture In reply to Snowy2525 [2017-03-06 09:27:31 +0000 UTC]

I've been thinking about this post - and whether to reply to it or not - and there are a few things I'd like to comment upon.

Firstly, I'm not sure whether with "grown up / adult" you are referring to yourself or me, but as you called me "girl" in one of your previous comments, I'm going to interpret it as if you were saying it about you. I'm an adult. You should have seen that coming, as I am a teacher, and it's not like they allow children in front of a classroom. And even if I were underage / a child, you should treat me as an equal, and give me the respect I deserve. I dislike your condescending attitude. Bin it.

Secondly, to refer to your "learnt your lesson now [...]?" comment - First rule of teaching: teaching does not equal learning. You can try to teach pupils something but if they're not interested etc, they will not learn it. Sure, I will listen to you - but that does not mean that I have to take it to heart. What you've been saying is your opinion, and not mine - I do not share it. Respect my opinion and don't rub yours into my face. And again - stop the condescending attitude.

Thirdly, to comment upon "I hope you ... only for you" - I don't owe you anything. If you spend your time writing out that comment, that's your choice. But that still doesn't mean that I have to do anything in return. Keep that in mind.

And lastly, I have been nice about this before but you didn't seem to get the hint, and thus I'll have to be more direct: You make me uncomfortable. (Which is a feat, as it's very difficult to make me uncomfortable online.) Please stop talking to me, or I'll have to block you.

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Snowy2525 In reply to Snowy2525 [2017-03-05 20:39:25 +0000 UTC]

btw. I added you poem to a group, I hope you don't mind

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dragonfuture In reply to Snowy2525 [2017-03-05 21:58:27 +0000 UTC]

I didn't get a notification about this...?

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