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Published: 2013-05-14 00:05:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 166; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description My name is Samuel Kritz, and I am the head scientist at W.I.E.L. ( Wildlife Investigations and Experiments Labs ) in Wing E4. Wing E4 is for “ Undetermined “ species we encounter, and it rarely ever has any experiments running. Most organisms around this area are found already, not even a simple cell is new. Until the day of August 20th arrived, that’s when it all changed. It was a rainy morning, I clocked in at exactly 5:29 A.M. and I would be here until 12:30 A.M. rarely getting any sleep, luckily coffee seems to keep me focused. At precisely 7:08 A.M. is when one of the field scientists groups reported they had found something strange, asleep in a cave about 4.8 Kilometers away from Titans Peak. The first thing that came to my mind was that it was probably a mutated animal, not even considering a new specimen. Boy was I in for a surprise. They rushed into the lab, the specimen covered in a white cloth to keep others from seeing it, this slightly concerned me. We were never ‘ shy ‘ with what we brought in to examine, what was so special about this one? As soon as it entered the examination lab they picked up the body and placed it on the cold, metal examining table. Trust me, it’s cold. When you have a couple drinks with the lab boys to celebrate Prof. Kimblru retiring you sometimes get wasted and fall asleep on examining tables. I was afraid I would lose a kidney.  Anyways, as soon as the body touched the metal table they pulled off the white cloth. I was surprised of what I saw, it wasn’t  like anything I had seen before. It had a long, slim body with it’s dark black skin the texture of rough leather. Not one spot of fur to be seen. It’s legs were long and slim to match it’s body, with 3 long claws. It had a long snout and what seemed to be 2 eyes per side, this truly was like nothing ever seen. A quick measurement of the specimen was that it’s body length , including it’s tail , was 2.438 Meters, or 8 Feet to put it easier.
“ What the hell is this..?” I asked quietly, as if talking to myself. My friend Cole Ranbo who helped find it responded,
“ We are still unsure, we are hoping you could run some tests with R4PT0R. "
“ R4PT0R? Have you gone mad Cole? R4PT0R was designed to make a species more elite, the ultimate tests on it and maybe something will come up.” He replied to me glancing at it, as it laid lifeless on the table. I shook my head and sighed.
“ Nothing will come up, this is something totally new. But you are right, tests are needed. What kind of tests were you thinking of Cole? “
“ Well Sam, the basic tests of course and how about the R4PT0R Formula test? “
apex predator. And you want me to test it out on this…thing? We don’t know what this specimen is capable of, R4PT0R on this subject is a bad choice Cole.”
“ Oh c’mon Sam! It would be a great opportunity to see what it is capable of doing on such a powerful drug. We still have the high tech security testing park, you could release him there until the drug runs out of his blood system. “
I let out a long, and big sigh and finally nodded my head.
“ Fine Cole, but if this all goes wrong and I get in trouble with Ward Kielf? I’m blaming you. “
Cole gave a grin before him and his troop of field scientists went away, it was just me and this creature.

I tried all I could to stimulate the creature to awake, but it seemed as if it was dead. Though it did have a heartbeat of 100 beats per minute. It was odd.  I had Cole in my lab as I tried to work on Rad, the name the lab boys gave him , and his awakening. I shook my head and looked at Cole as he sipped his coffee,
“ Isn’t there any way to wake Rad up? “ He asked scratching his scruffy chin from his last shave. All I could do was shake my head.
“ Afraid not Cole, It will take time for it to wake up. Maybe even years. This is a new species, we have no idea what we are up against. “ I quickly replied to him as I threw away my gloves in the trash. It was 12:10 A.M. and I wanted to pack everything up so it would be nice and neat for the next morning. Cole frowned at me but quickly gave me a large smile, as if a idea came to his mind.
“ Sam, Go to Campbell’s lab and get me some H20, X9Y, and Oxy. I believe Campbell came up with a formula which when put up to a specimens noise will trigger it to wake up. “ Cole said as he glanced down at Rad. I felt uneasy, as if something bad was going to happen. I ignored the feeling though and went to the lab, what a horrible mistake I had done. By the time I got back…, it was like hell had broken loose. Blood was everywhere, Rad was gone, Cole was in the corner blood leaking from his wounds, and an empty casing of R4PT0R laid on the table. I dropped the chemicals and ran to him, half of his right arm was gone and his leg had a deep gash in it. I felt as if I was going to cry, he just sat there passed out in his own blood.
“Cole you idiot…what did I tell you about R4PT0R?” I muttered under my heavy breath. The first thing that came to mind for me to do was call the authorities and alert the alarm. I got up, pulling my iPhone 5 from my lab coat pocket and dialed 911 as I reached for the alarm.
“ Hello 9-1-1 what’s your emergen- “

That’s when the line went dead, and it all got dark. The emergency generator lights came on, giving the room a dim glow. I figured Rad was hiding in the walls, with each movement clawing at the electricity and the labs special mobile phone service. Turns out when you have your own service for you lab you don’t pay for anything on the area, it was quite nice. But now that privilege was taken away. My heart was pounding. I quickly made my way to my desk and pulled out a pistol from one of the drawers, I had to defend myself. I slowly made my way to the alarm and grasped it with my fingers, I felt as if Rad was watching my every move. The alarm was pulled, a siren went off, and I heard the shriek of a monster. It sounded like the sound you would hear in a horror movie, a loud and horrible roar. I figured it was time to go.

I ran down the hall, my hand gripped to the pistol as I ran, heart racing. Suddenly, I heard loud bangs. As I turned my head I saw dents in the metal walls. He was in the walls, and was ready to come out. My running pace quickened, I was scared for my life. I felt as if my last days on Earth were approaching. As I got close  to Emergency Exit X112 that’s when Rad popped out from the ceiling. He was different. He had spikes running from the base of his back to his tail, and he seemed to grow in size. The R4PT0R had truly taken a toll on him. His purple snake tongue slipped out of it’s snout and his four red eyes glared at me in hatred. I aimed my gun, it let out a cry, I began to shoot. Before I knew it I was on the ground, Rad pulling at my arm and clawing my chest with his front limbs. I cried out for help, though I knew no one would heard my cries. I glanced up and saw my Pistol, my last chance. I kicked Rad in the gut which made him get off me, giving time to grab my gun. I shot at him more, the bullets doing no damage to his leathery skin. As he approached me, I noticed the air vent above him. Hoping it would scare him I shot at it, hard to believe it but it worked. The cold rush of air and the loud sound spooked him and he went on a scared rampage, clawing at the walls. I thought I could finally escape but it seemed he was too clever for me. As soon as I began to crawl away he swatted me down with his tail and grabbed my leg with his jaws, pulling me down the hall. I let out a cry and rolled on my back, I noticed something. A soft spot, in the middle of his head. I aimed my gun, and let out one shot. I was instantly dropped and he let out a cry. I let out a cry in return, when I mean instantly dropped I mean he bit off my leg in the process of letting go of me. Blood was everywhere again. I was blacking out. Rad ran down the hall, far out of vision before everything was black.

I woke up, 2 weeks later with perfect memory of what happened. I told my tale and the hunt was on for Rad. Rad left me with a broken arm and half of my left leg, he could have been kinder to Cole. It turns out my friend was hit more times in the back, instead of me just thinking he lost his arm. His whole back was clawed in with deep wounds. He died of blood loss. Ever since then I have been out of the Lab, I’m allowed to go back in 1 month when all the wheel chair arrangements have been made for me. Another thing is that Rad, still hasn’t been found. It’s a case now taken on by the government, labeling him as a Dangerous Alien that must be exterminated and dissected. All I knew was that I was alive, and not dead. That’s all that mattered.
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Comments: 3

Crowhat [2013-05-14 22:07:44 +0000 UTC]

oops! made a small mistake "A suspicious scarlet color painted the walls, Rad was nowhere in sight, Cole was slouched in the corner seemingly lifeless, blood leaking from his wounds, and an innocent, empty case laid on the table."

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Crowhat [2013-05-14 22:06:54 +0000 UTC]

omg its good
but although i do have to say that i wish you provided more descriptive stuff, i can't really picture the story in my head all that well. i also thought that the ending was too abrupt, and i think it should have more of a feeling within sams mind, like more emotion, because in my opinion it was a bit more like telling than showing. like instead of "Blood was everywhere, Rad was gone, Cole was in the corner blood leaking from his wounds, and an empty casing of R4PT0R laid on the table." you could have "A suspicious scarlet color painted the walls, Rad was nowhere in sight, Cole was slouched in the corner seemingly lifeless and blood leaked from his wounds, and an innocent, empty case laid on the table." so yeah! i thought your story was pretty good! keep on doing what you do!

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Dramatic-Cat In reply to Crowhat [2013-05-14 23:08:51 +0000 UTC]

my teacher said dont worry on details just get to the point ffff-
i would have added much more detail
i might redo it i dont know yet.


anyways thanks andy <333

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