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Dripsofmoonlight — Superfluous
Published: 2006-02-05 16:56:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 33; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Superfluous
Am I being delirious?
There is no “us”
I say too much.

Instantaneous
I know that I woke too late
And now I have a lifetime to wait
In a moment future wanes

Insidious
Am I being incredulous?
Have not I learned to trust
The lying eyes: their black

Hope enough
Perhaps if I love enough
But I know that’s not enough
I’ll never, no...alone again
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Comments: 3

deviantbrain [2006-02-10 18:59:02 +0000 UTC]

I have little to say about this poem...
What's superflous anyway?

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Dripsofmoonlight In reply to deviantbrain [2006-02-11 03:32:40 +0000 UTC]

If i remember correctly, it's an excess of words; unnecessary.

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deviantbrain In reply to Dripsofmoonlight [2006-02-11 12:17:38 +0000 UTC]

Ah - see, I didn't know that.
Interesting that it should apear in a poetry.

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