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I've heard stories of princesOf romance and love
Of witches and slippers
And snowy white doves
But what I want to hear,
And the one you don't know,
Is the tale of the raven,
Made up as I go
He once was a sparrow
A little brown bird
Appearing quite often
In song and in word
But this bird was not happy
He didn't like his size
He envied bigger birds
With his beady little eye
Then one day he perched
On a well not that small
To see his reflection
But there wasn't one at all
For the well was old magic
And only in this:
It can change your appearance
With one little sip
Well, the bird didn't know this
And he said with a sigh
I wish I was like the birds
Bigger than I
Then he took a quick drink
And with loudest din
He was bigger and stronger
Than he'd ever been
"Wow, this is amazing!"
He said with a caw
And reacted in horror
For it wasn't a song
He tried once again
To sing like before
But all that came out
Was just one caw more
Startled and scared
He ran to his friends
But before he spoke
The turned tail and fled
"Oh, it's true I'm a raven!"
He said with a start
"I can talk to my kind now
The ravens at heart"
But when he went to greet them
They laughed at first sight
And they told him with glee
What he hadn't done right
"You walk like a sparrow
You're quite the young fool
Be who you are
That's our only rule"
And so our poor raven
A sparrow inside
Went back to the well
And started to cry
"Oh why did I wish that!
For I love to sing
To get that life back
I'd do anything!"
And another sip later
Some racket and noise
He had his old size back
His color and voice
He never returned
To the well after that
For he realized where
His heart had been at
And the moral, my friends?
It's easy to see
Be who you are
And happy you'll be
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Comments: 8
deviantbrain [2006-02-10 19:09:56 +0000 UTC]
Meow. I adore it...
I find Stories/poems that have some underlying meaning
more interesting than those written just to sound nice...
Not that there is anything wring with that! I just don't like it. XD
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Gothic-Archangel [2006-02-07 09:06:41 +0000 UTC]
very nice
good rhymes...
and the moral....it should be obvious....and it's true
it's just sad that most people try to be somebody else...and therefore loose themselves....
why do so many of us wish to be somebody they aren't? =.=""
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Dripsofmoonlight In reply to Gothic-Archangel [2006-02-08 21:31:48 +0000 UTC]
Because we as humans are never happy enough with what we have. We always want more, and better, and faster, and easier.
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Gothic-Archangel In reply to Dripsofmoonlight [2006-02-08 22:20:03 +0000 UTC]
strange.. guess then i'm not human
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XxRainChildxX [2006-02-07 04:51:48 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, I love this poem! It's so cute and sad, great moral, too. Good job, all I saw wrong was lack of punctuation.
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Dripsofmoonlight In reply to XxRainChildxX [2006-02-08 21:32:56 +0000 UTC]
I'll try and work on that in the future.
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Dripsofmoonlight In reply to Caedocn [2006-02-06 02:07:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you...you responded fast...are you stalking me? >.<
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