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Published: 2008-04-12 05:08:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1053; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description A dedication to the man I share the earth core with.

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When I whisper your name to my pillow she gets mad at me
for having long hair.
It got into her eyes, she complains. Female jealousy, I’d say.

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Surely your arms sing in the same decibels as my bathrobe.

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You laughed when I told you that I
brushed my teeth for half an hour
and how beautiful your stubble would look
in my wash-basin.

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Believe me when I tell you
I would give up a whole album of family
                                                       photos,
                          a whole row of French
                                                       perfumes
                          a whole wardrobe of white
                                                         shirts…

for one of yours.

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Blurry horizons, you’re the dream of every paper boat which
sets off across the Black Sea
but if you don’t like your complexion, I’ll pepper you with mine.
You don’t mind ice-cream teeth, do you?

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I want to introduce you to my bus No.3 and the bus driver
who loves posters of naked women
on the windscreen.
He wanted to meet the person I’ve waited longer than him.

~

Help me,
Your name fills a three-volume dictionary



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Comments: 61

drop-asd In reply to ??? [2009-08-17 10:35:10 +0000 UTC]

It has to do with a conversation we once had but I really can't remember what it was about anymore O.o

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-08-17 13:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Well it was totally lost upon me dear And I *know* that that link wasn't there when I saw the deviation before! Unless I was ignorant?

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-08-19 18:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it was. I distinctly remember searching for it before submitting the poem.

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-08-19 18:44:03 +0000 UTC]

I remember the comment - but not the comment being a link

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-08-19 19:15:21 +0000 UTC]

You probably just haven't clicked it

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-08-19 19:16:50 +0000 UTC]

I did when I noticed it, looking back over your work, but it made no sense to me XD

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DogmaticKerr [2009-06-18 22:46:25 +0000 UTC]

More time has passed and this piece has lost none of its magic, none of its wonder, none of my love for it Truly lucky is the subject of poem, the object of your affections

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-06-20 08:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Truly lucky? Nah, he's got a nightmarish family and broken childhood, a few suicide attempts and a face he wants to cover with paper bags! Not lucky at all, imho.

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-06-20 18:36:04 +0000 UTC]

Me?

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-06-20 20:20:48 +0000 UTC]

Oh, please don't tell me you've forgotten. I specially stopped by your page to let you know after I posted it. Shame really, I thought it'd create a greater impression

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-06-20 20:21:49 +0000 UTC]

But... me? Really? Why on earth would you write something like that about me - I always figured it was someone else! Nearly all others seem to be, I merely assumed

Sorry

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-06-28 13:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Because... you make me happy and I've had some incredibly sweet thoughts about you that simply transformed into metaphorical images, if that makes any sense. Maybe it was written as a thankyou but most of all I wrote it because I wanted to somehow show you how much I cared and longed for you.

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-06-28 17:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Awwww yeesh, you're a sweetheart, sweetheart I love it when you indulge me with explanations about stuff like this

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-06-28 20:00:38 +0000 UTC]

I should do this more often, shouldn't I?
You did say your father is from somewhere around the Caucasian mountains, right?

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-06-29 01:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Ack! I would love it if you did, so yes, you should! But I warn you - if you flatter me too much, make me blush too much, and make me too giddy... I could pass out!

Caucasian mountains? His lineage is incredibly white, if that's what you mean and there actually used to be an area know as Caucasia, I think but as for origin, I believe it was actually Walla Walla, Washington? He does not like to talk about himself or his past too much - was never very forward with that sort of thing. Come to think of it, neither of my parents ever were! I used to hear from classmates, all sorts of things about their parents... and they knew them so well, knew all about their pasts and the like - always made me feel weird.

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-06-29 11:37:13 +0000 UTC]

That'd be too bad. Please do warn me when there's no one around to help you so that I know when to stop!

Hmm, I distinctly remember something along those lines but you've obviously talked about somewhere else. You Americans have stolen the names of all places in Europe!
Don't feel lonely, bear. I have almost no knowledge about my mother's past and relatives either. It happens when you live away from them, when you move a lot or when you don't like them. Do you regret not knowing more?

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-06-29 19:01:30 +0000 UTC]

Cutie-pie, no worries! I have a large head and thick skull - I am sure that any incidents while passing out will not harm me And besides, I love it too much!

I thought that white people were generally referred to as caucasians? Or is that only here in the States? Oh I love that, "You Americans!" I'm sorry on our behalf, my Bulgarian goddess
Really? Why is that - I thought that you were close with your mother, she always seemed as much a sweetie as you! Ah, no, I do not - I got over the awkwardness of not knowing much of anything about my parents - I got used to it. I learned, very early on, to really not bother my parents for anything - not for help or anything... I guess they just scared me and hurt me too much to want to get to know them the way that others would. How about you sweetie?

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2009-07-01 20:49:51 +0000 UTC]

I can't be sure. Better safe than sorry You love passing out?

Hmm, I have never heard anything like that. You should have told me a bit earlier Haha, apology accepted just this once

Oh yes, I'm pretty close with her but we live with my father's parents and only visit hers a few times a year so I know only her immediate family. And she's kinda... she keeps herself to herself and is reluctant to go into detail even if you ask her. I think it has to do with family issues.
Yeah, I can imagine that having heard stories about your parents. They sure don't sound very encouraging.
Me...?

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2009-07-01 20:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, thank you for being so considerate! Well, I do if it's you whose making me

Hehehehe, you haven't? Well, it is a common way to describe white people in the States Very common - though, I always wondered about the validity of it. Thank you kitten

I thought so Ahhhhh, okay, that makes more sense now... hmm, does she like it there? Awww, she sounds quiet... kinda like you I can't blame her if that's the case...

No, not in the least - I was always more concerned with not getting hit or yelled at to care about any personal details. And after a while, I was just scared to ask - didn't want to!

Yes, you!

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DogmaticKerr [2008-10-27 05:27:43 +0000 UTC]

I've always loved this string... and always wish it could have been me
Something I love about your work is how it maintains its integrity, even when you're looking back at it a million moments after its creation.

My work never holds the same potential.

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lX-Kiki-Xl [2008-10-13 00:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Guess what? Your amazing. <3

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kLiT-sHy [2008-04-13 00:14:23 +0000 UTC]

d, this is full of bubbles and heartstrings

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drop-asd In reply to kLiT-sHy [2008-04-13 14:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Indeed, sis

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psihogirl [2008-04-12 18:33:44 +0000 UTC]

o mai gudnes lele milo razbiva6 me prosto spr spr e gotino tova
ama samo za svedenie tooo po s1rce li e ili po muza .. taka deee samo ot liubopitstvo.. ama ako e po s1rce da znai6 4e sledva razsledvane ot moq strana

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drop-asd In reply to psihogirl [2008-04-13 14:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Mersi milo
Hahahahaha, nikvo razsledvane! Ti ako prave6e razsledvanie za vsi4kite mi posve6teniq i podobni romantic izcepki 6te6e da stane6 na 6erlok holms!

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DogmaticKerr [2008-04-12 18:22:20 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-13 07:20:59 +0000 UTC]

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2008-04-13 07:34:28 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-13 13:01:46 +0000 UTC]

I still worship you for What The Rain Knows

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2008-04-13 15:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe, I'm glad you do ^.^ One of my more adventurous pieces Still proud of it, to a degree at least

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-13 16:07:42 +0000 UTC]

Mmm, I think that a lot of your other pieces can be said to be just as adventurous but that is very intense indeed. The image of Tyrael and the blue lights still haunts me.

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2008-04-13 17:06:35 +0000 UTC]

^.^ Well, as good as it may be, it doesn't even compare to both the body and quality of work that you have been producing, dear, not just in poetry but art as well!

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-13 18:15:12 +0000 UTC]

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2008-04-14 06:15:16 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-16 04:03:23 +0000 UTC]

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2008-04-16 04:20:51 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-16 12:27:51 +0000 UTC]

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2008-04-16 16:10:52 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-16 16:44:03 +0000 UTC]

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DogmaticKerr In reply to drop-asd [2008-04-16 18:29:37 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-16 18:54:25 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-17 10:50:17 +0000 UTC]

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drop-asd In reply to DogmaticKerr [2008-04-18 19:31:10 +0000 UTC]

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