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Published: 2004-06-27 03:58:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 87; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 10
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You say you know where you are,are you home?
I hope its cozy
lying in that hotel bed,
crying over me
I'm still here,
waiting by the phone like normal
just hoping for a sign
since most of the time I wonder,
are you home?
You tell everyone your just fine,
even though your eyes give you away
for there as red as a stop sign,
but we can fix all this
with just a ring of the phone,
since all you have to say is,
I'm coming home
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Comments: 4
Karichemia [2004-07-01 14:46:55 +0000 UTC]
I love it. But in the third line I think "there" should be "they're"
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asforeverxfades [2004-06-27 19:00:24 +0000 UTC]
this is some of your best work. Very impressive. Nice images here
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LeftCoastEnvy [2004-06-27 04:16:22 +0000 UTC]
...first stanza = wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.
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