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dustyreader — A Little Dose
Published: 2009-05-16 06:46:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Can you remember
the date today?
or have all the days slid into each other like
the evaporating colors in a rainbow
or a car into another,
car parts strewn with bloodless carnage across the asphalt.
the spectators are slowing down now to stare and
feel alive.

It’s too easy, too easy to feel your heartbeat
and the wheel under your hands,
the sweat-slick texture of your skin,
the pattern of your breathing
and the slight throb behind your left eye
from staying up too late,
and a thousand other annoyances that let you know
you’re still on Earth
when it’s all stopped
for someone else.

But it breaks the monotony, right?
for the brief few moments you see it,
before it’s filed away under “Memory”
or just discarded, you remember you’re alive,
because it’s so easy to forget that,
and a little dose of death cures that,
as long as it’s not your own.
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Comments: 6

Ishvala [2009-05-17 06:07:30 +0000 UTC]

That was delicious. Thank you for existing.

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dustyreader In reply to Ishvala [2009-05-21 07:22:19 +0000 UTC]

Likewise and thanks!

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Ishvala In reply to dustyreader [2009-05-21 07:24:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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ZenithHalcyon [2009-05-17 01:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Second and third stanzas hit me like a ton of bricks.

Powerful imagery here.

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dustyreader In reply to ZenithHalcyon [2009-05-27 22:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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ZenithHalcyon In reply to ZenithHalcyon [2009-05-17 01:30:21 +0000 UTC]

Just read the last line over again and realized that this reminds me so much of Tool's song "Vicarious"--have you heard that one?

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