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dynamitehackr416 — Remember
Published: 2011-10-07 04:45:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 118; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description Do you remember summer nights
Of not so very long ago
When time had lost all meaning
And the days would never end?

But suddenly you're gone,
Just as quickly as I found you
On that fateful night
Our two worlds first collided.

I know you're out there somwhere
But I wonder if you think of me
The same way that I still remember you.
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Comments: 5

platinummyr [2011-10-08 18:39:37 +0000 UTC]

a heart it slow to forget,
but the wind blows emotions
every which way.

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dynamitehackr416 In reply to platinummyr [2011-10-08 19:48:40 +0000 UTC]

how true those words are

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platinummyr In reply to dynamitehackr416 [2011-10-09 04:43:26 +0000 UTC]

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mydoctor11 [2011-10-07 04:47:43 +0000 UTC]

It's good. I would take out "awfully" though.

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dynamitehackr416 In reply to mydoctor11 [2011-10-07 04:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm. I think I might be in agreement to at least change it if not take it out completely. Many thanks!

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