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Published: 2009-10-08 09:15:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 422; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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1st Request for . I did badly on this one. Its way to plain and simple >_>Related content
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This is good, especialy the hands you did and excelent job. The cloths style is good, but you could try to add some folds to it(wirnkels ect). Pose is great nicely done. Other than tath you did a great job keep it up.
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I guess the time has come huh? Very well...
You have a good grasp on the line tool that you're using but over all this isn't screaming out to me. I've gone back in your gallery and seen things that nearly moved me to tears but this is just bland.
It isn't the form of the body that you lack knowledge from; nor is it something in your technique. You lack passion. You lack that fire in your soul that presses you to do better than the last piece. Great artists are great because they don't settle for what is good.
This leads me to wonder; what is your philosophy for art as a whole? What is it you believe art is. When you find that then apply it you will begin to see improvement.
Make a piece that jumps out at me, that has every bit of emotion you're feeling at the moment and conveys it in a way that we the viewers can understand. This is what you need to do for this piece.
That's all I can see... you aren't selling it and your work is suffering for it. Sell it to us, put a little more emotion in it and you'll see results.
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I fell like a animish-like main hero tutored by a generic experienced oracle. Your question gived me a lot to think abaut now "what is your philosophy for art as a whole?". Thats a tough nut really. Please give me time to think abaut it.
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Heh, it's just a little food for thought I suppose. It isn't something you can just make up on the spot. Took me two years to come up with the answer for myself and I'm still letting it evolve in my head and on paper. I tell you, if you can figure it out for yourself then you're a lot closer to improving than you were moments before.
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You might try and add a logo or a large symbol on his shirt to try and spice it up a bit. Try and elaborate on his facial expression a bit more, which will help in solidifying his persona, ya?
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Well I don't know what the request was but I think you did well, the anatomy and his expression are my favorite part.
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ask, and ye shall recieve. 'bout the only things you could fix with this one is the shoulder line needs to appear to be parallel with th hip line, instead of appearing like he's got a slouch in one shoulder, or make the hips appear to be tilted to support that kind of slouch, and make the clothing more defined over his muscles. his forward arm seems to be a touch distorted. Other than that, it looks good. :3
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Humm, Intersting
the smoothness is nice here
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