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I found you.Tempered.
Controlled.
Collared.
I wanted to touch.
Just a simple caress.
Nothing more.
That's what I promised myself.
But you are ....
so tempting, able, available.
The catch of your breath
The wet of your tongue
The tease of the collar
The lure of your flesh
The need in your eyes
Just a single touch
That is all I can allow
Though maybe not even that.
Watching you I realize the strength of my own need and the shivers coursing through my body are not form the cold.
I must fold my trembling hands together behind my back.
I must stop myself from engaging, from connecting. Further.
For to do more I might rip our desire apart and drink freely and none will be able to tell who is the truly collared one.
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Comments: 23
Aspiringwriteroflove [2013-08-19 18:13:21 +0000 UTC]
"I love the depth of your writing... The last line makes me want to read on.... Very inspirational... J.L. Thomas. (Author of 'Shiver')
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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to Aspiringwriteroflove [2013-11-26 05:24:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you sooo much!!
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SelestialRain [2013-06-24 21:55:19 +0000 UTC]
I really like the short sentences,they are clear and sharp and it makes the imagery more intence!
Nice one!
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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to SelestialRain [2013-11-26 05:25:20 +0000 UTC]
I had fun writing this thanks
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looFsydoboN [2013-03-02 15:01:06 +0000 UTC]
Great capturing of the tension of restraint. Glad the image wasn't overly naughty.
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man-blu [2013-02-26 13:58:07 +0000 UTC]
Speaks of a lust, a desire so deep it is painful, almost visceral. Fantastic words that conjure a multitude of feelings. I am humbled that my image could inspire such eloquence.
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EatingMyOwnFears In reply to man-blu [2013-02-28 15:25:11 +0000 UTC]
I am do glad you like it!!
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