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Published: 2017-11-07 19:18:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 139; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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a commission from Olip0p , hope you like it! commission info-fav.me/dbrzoewall art copyrights reserved to eclixpse, character rightfully claimed by Olip0p
DO NOT TRACE, CLAIM, COPY MY ART
WHAT I USED
Prismacolor Fine Tip Pens
Crayola Supertip Markers
Staedtler Colored Pencils
Recollections Gel Pens
Sakura Gelly Roll White Pen
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Comments: 9
I am here to critique your art as you asked a couple days ago in a status thing.
It's pretty nice. I like how you did your hair and the way you coloured it.
However, with the hair, it wouldn't hurt to bring the top down some. I know the feel of wanting exaggerated hair or draw full hair and all, but with how high it is on this piece it seems as if they got a lot of head than they really do. The forehead is good, it's just the hair makes it look 2 times bigger. Also, this person looks a little stiff. I don't really know how to prevent that tbh, but sometimes all it helps is to just know a problem, you know? Finally, the freckles (I assume) are a bit big. It mostly looks like holes in the face.
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thank you so much <3
yes, the hair is poorly illustrated. the hair itself is 'bigger' and seems like an awfully huge head.
and yes, i should've drawn the freckles in a flesh tone, not a harsh black.
ahah lol and i should've added a little more movement to the person, like a peace sign or something. but again, this is not my character, this was a commission. so i wasn't really left with more choices.
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anytime! your oc is adorable (:
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and also, i forgot to mention something!!
if you could, it'd be greatly appreciated if you could tag this journal in a status update/journal.
thank you so much <3
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Link me the journal ^^
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