HOME | DD

koukon-ookami [2011-02-19 20:48:53 +0000 UTC]

At first glance I think this is cute, but I think you deserve some friendly criticism. I think you should bleed the colours out from the page so there is no white edges where the pink is. Make both pinks (top and bottom) the same. You should also try switching your name and graphic designer so that your name stands out more. so instead of Eyrnn C. TaniMoto | GRAPHIC DESIGNER. it should be ERYNN C. TANIMOTO | Graphic Designer.
Perhaps try to bring the footer lower a bit as it takes away from the lettering. Also maybe bold the contact text and you will have a sweet letter head

👍: 0 ⏩: 0