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Published: 2019-02-13 20:29:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1378; Favourites: 64; Downloads: 3
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FINALLY GOT THIS DONE!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S NEON BOUNCING!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOKITHIMGO!!!!!!!!!I already know about the errors with his paws so you don't gotta tell me. :'''') hh they're beyond fixing at this point tho. Feel free to critique me on everything else tho!! I wanna get good at this.Β
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GodlyPikaY [2019-02-13 21:17:36 +0000 UTC]
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Looks really adorable, but let me say a few things.
1.) The light blue fur on the legs looks odd. I say this because it looks like it is teleporting in place rather than moving with the rest of the body.
2.) Since he's bouncing, his fur that is more pointed out--as well as his wrapped clothing--should be in motion. What I mean is have them move up and down in their own way, not just the same motion as the body while remaining completely still.
Overall, great job! This definitely goes in my favorites.
[Also, what is his paws suppose to be doing? If you don't mind me asking?]
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to GodlyPikaY [2019-02-13 23:55:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for the critique!! ;o; And his paws were supposed to just be making an up and down motion..but I accidentally made them too small in one frame
so it looks like they're pulsing. My bad.
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Secksy-sensei [2019-02-15 00:59:38 +0000 UTC]
"CHOOSE YOUR CHARACTER!!!" π΅π΅π΅
It means putting in a lot more work, but for more realistic motion, you can add more secondary actions to the animation---
In this case, you could take the parts of the figure which are more floppy (like the ears), and on the frame where the character has reached the lowest part of the bounce, redraw them angled a bit downwards. Then with onionskins, you can add some in-betweens to make the secondary actions more gradual (You might already know thisΒ Β idk)
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to Secksy-sensei [2019-02-16 01:29:34 +0000 UTC]
ooo okey I'll try that next time!!! Thank you!!! :'D (I knew it looked off but I didn't know how to go about fixing it aaa qwq)
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Tykinater In reply to EmilyTheMeowth [2019-02-16 09:07:31 +0000 UTC]
In addition to what Secksy said, adding a little motion to the cheek fur would help the character feel more lively. Β
I love the subtle eye squint. Β :3
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to Tykinater [2019-02-17 02:04:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the advice!! :'D
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to Watermelonthecat [2019-02-14 18:36:58 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the pointless comment i guess
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Watermelonthecat In reply to EmilyTheMeowth [2019-02-14 18:43:15 +0000 UTC]
What can I say except you're welcome!
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to Watermelonthecat [2019-02-14 18:45:13 +0000 UTC]
you aren't funny
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Watermelonthecat In reply to EmilyTheMeowth [2019-02-14 19:31:30 +0000 UTC]
How did you know
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SealSpirits [2019-02-14 05:10:06 +0000 UTC]
YAY ITS FINALLY DONE!! WOOHOOO >w<
(What is he doing to his paws? Mmm it kinda looks like it's turning big and small)
Maybe make his fur move along with him! >w<
Like you know if anime their hair moves? Kinda like that?
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to SealSpirits [2019-02-14 18:42:32 +0000 UTC]
They were supposed to be going up and down but I messed up haha. ;v; And thank you I'll try following that advice next time!! cxΒ
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SealSpirits In reply to EmilyTheMeowth [2019-02-14 23:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Ahh, thanks cx
It's oki x3
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to Jaroodless [2019-02-14 18:37:16 +0000 UTC]
yee aa thanks ;u;
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EmilyTheMeowth In reply to Edwars1999 [2019-02-14 18:37:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!!! cxΒ
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Tren-Foxx [2019-02-13 20:32:34 +0000 UTC]
Yes you did a great job on this!! Keep it up!!
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