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Published: 2004-05-10 00:52:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 325; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 24
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Kiss me, hurt me,Tease me, leave me
all of a sudden im dizzy
please me, freeze me,
forget me, depress me,
Life isnt right for me
Mezmorize me, suprise me
lie to me, cry with me
defy me....
scare me, dare me,
show me, hold me,
suddenly.....lonely......
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Comments: 11
punkie078 [2005-02-18 22:14:11 +0000 UTC]
wow, matty. i like it. I just realized that I've never read any of your poetry.
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Jazz-Queen [2004-10-08 00:31:02 +0000 UTC]
i absolutaly LOVE this poem. simple yet emotional..absolutaly amazing.
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endlessdark In reply to Jazz-Queen [2004-11-08 16:11:59 +0000 UTC]
WOO thx...sorry it took me so long to responde....BUT i did..lol
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Ashley-Himura [2004-06-29 16:38:40 +0000 UTC]
oh wow^^ it's like so emotional.. I agree with simmo, though, that I do It's basically what I think, too
excellent poem
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rukira [2004-06-09 20:39:37 +0000 UTC]
I have a poem similar to this one o_O *freaky* but your's is better of course *sucks at poetry* Anyway, I like the way it has good things and bad. Good things always seem to come with bad ones...
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PoetryInMyWounds [2004-06-04 22:09:42 +0000 UTC]
The last line is my favorite one... it's really simple and pretty. nice poem.
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crestfallenheart [2004-05-10 02:23:23 +0000 UTC]
WOoHooo! yayaaaa! Very nice rhyming scheme. I love it.
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simmo [2004-05-10 00:59:32 +0000 UTC]
of all good things that happen ,bad things are sure to follow. We look for the person that will not be like the others. Great poem. +fav
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