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EndlessOne — I could only wait
Published: 2004-08-31 00:44:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 304; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 22
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Description You left me standing there
as I took in those painful words
branded into my memory.

You left me standing there
wondering what mistake was made
with eyes full of tears.

You left me standing there
as time stopped to laugh
at my broken heart.

I cried in silence
as strange faces passed me by.
They stared at me
with expressions that tore me apart.
I tried to hide everything
but with each passing moment
the pain grew within.
I called for you but the silence
rang through the crowd
as I searched for the face so dear.

You left me standing there
with no where left to go
as the last ounce of hope was drained from my very existence.

You left me standing there
wanting to disappear from the world
and all the sorrow it gave.

You left me standing there
because deep in my heart
I knew you were hurting.

Because you left me standing there
I couldn't hate you
I couldn't love you
I could only stand there


.... and wait.
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Comments: 25

funkfaerie [2004-09-01 14:58:57 +0000 UTC]

Awww... I just want to pick you up and carry you home and give you a big steamy mug of hot chocolate!

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EndlessOne In reply to funkfaerie [2004-09-01 22:51:51 +0000 UTC]

hehe. hot chocolate is good. But I think you might have a problem with picking me up though...
I'm 5'8" and 18 so it might be a little hard.

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funkfaerie In reply to EndlessOne [2004-09-01 22:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... i'm 5'3"... you're right.... it could be quite hard. :sweat:

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EndlessOne In reply to funkfaerie [2004-09-01 23:02:59 +0000 UTC]

lol... i could pick you up...

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Yoyogrl2 [2004-09-01 00:13:12 +0000 UTC]

Wow. I'm amazed. that was beautiful. made me teary eyed too! i loved it a lot!! thanks for puttin that up! i love it.

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EndlessOne In reply to Yoyogrl2 [2004-09-01 02:38:20 +0000 UTC]

hehe, thanks. you should fave... ....

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p0cky [2004-08-31 04:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Damn youu!!! xDDD YOU DRAW AND WRITE GOOD!

Ahm so damn jealous!

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EndlessOne In reply to p0cky [2004-08-31 07:42:45 +0000 UTC]

gahhh!!! -has been stabbed- ... :0_o:

I think this is really the only good one I've written....

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p0cky In reply to EndlessOne [2004-08-31 12:08:31 +0000 UTC]

-hands you band*aid-

Ahm still damn jealous!

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EndlessOne In reply to p0cky [2004-09-01 02:36:49 +0000 UTC]

yay!!! -sticks on inu bandaid-

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Gougec17 [2004-08-31 01:37:16 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Did you write all that. That's beautiful.

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EndlessOne In reply to Gougec17 [2004-08-31 03:43:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, and yes I did write it all. I kind of edited it to what you see.

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Gougec17 In reply to EndlessOne [2004-08-31 06:26:38 +0000 UTC]

That is cool. You did a beautiful job with the words

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EndlessOne In reply to Gougec17 [2004-08-31 07:41:59 +0000 UTC]

hehe, thanks. ^_^

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Gougec17 In reply to EndlessOne [2004-08-31 13:56:21 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome. I used to could write all beautiful like that.

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Gougec17 In reply to Gougec17 [2004-09-01 03:38:26 +0000 UTC]

I do sometimes

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EndlessOne In reply to Gougec17 [2004-09-01 02:35:24 +0000 UTC]

you never know, you still might. ^^

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Gougec17 In reply to EndlessOne [2004-09-01 03:38:45 +0000 UTC]

sometimes I still do

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EndlessOne In reply to Gougec17 [2004-09-01 04:26:32 +0000 UTC]

yay!! ^_^

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Gougec17 In reply to EndlessOne [2004-09-01 10:55:36 +0000 UTC]

I'll let you read some here next week

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Gougec17 In reply to Gougec17 [2004-09-05 09:09:10 +0000 UTC]

Well I'm back, just gotta find it now

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EndlessOne In reply to Gougec17 [2004-09-01 22:48:25 +0000 UTC]

Awesome. ^_^

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froggishness [2004-08-31 01:22:11 +0000 UTC]

i really really love the third stanza. i really super-duper love it because it made me all teary and now i have the sniffoos.

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froggishness [2004-08-31 01:16:52 +0000 UTC]

i really really love the third stanza. i really super-duper love it because it made me all teary and now i have the sniffoos.

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EndlessOne In reply to froggishness [2004-08-31 03:42:47 +0000 UTC]

^^. Thanks, glad you like it.

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