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Eyes Of A Raven- Page 7
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Bramble, I know you feel proud to have avenged Whitestorm, but WATCH OUT FOR THE RAGE-FILLED FELINE ABOUT TO SHRED THE FUR OFF YOUR BACK!!!
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Brambleclaw/paw/star nooooooooooooo it wasn’t just you
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Is it bad that I'm kind of rooting for the she-cat?
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Late, but same. She might be really clumsy, tbh.
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eye of a raven
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i kinda figured that out alittle while ago
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This actually makes you feel kinda bad for BloodClan..
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who is that? is it bramblepaw? or tigerstar (u dumbfuck tigerstar go die a 9201920234893274098 times ) im on the 5 book sooo it
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It's Bramblepaw, Tigerstar died before the battle between Bloodclan and Lionclan
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yeah i jus read that. IM SO SAD 4 BRAMBLE D:
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Go she-cat! I still don't know her name lol. This is my favorite warrior cats comic now
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How do you turn off the mature filter? Or how old do have to be to get rid of it?
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well its only a warning level mature filter so you should just be able to click the button and it'll go off, whatever your age is
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You did really well with the first two boxes. the eyes and face have great detail, though a tiny touch up wouldn't hurt. What needs work is the last three boxes. The FACE! detail to the face is crucial in comics. Too much or too little can take away from the emotional impact a character may have on the reader. Also, a little more detail with the claws and wound would add to the aesthetic appeal. Make the claws really seem to dig into the flesh, rather than prick it. Use a little more red and add some slightly curved lines to detail a puncture wound, or add slightly jagged lines to make it seem like a gash. Either way, a little more detail here would be great. Otherwise, I think this be nice!
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Your drawing style of Bloodbird is way different from the newest page!
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Yes, I've improved a lot X3
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Clans, forest cats, same thing XD
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Eh, I like her, but...I'm still on the Clans' side. xD
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Hey this looks great!! Why haven't I been reading this?!
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