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Published: 2016-01-08 03:42:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 70886; Favourites: 422; Downloads: 113
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Testing speech bubbles and comic layouts. Please tell me how does this look, good or bad because this is my first time making comic page. Thanks!(Note: This is just a test subject so there is no beginning or end of this story)
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His nose bleeding, really bloody.
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Sooooooooooooooo kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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well, there's a tiny bit too much room at the top, I'd say, and in that first frame I don't really know what Sylveon is holding with her paws. also, having the speech bubble right above jolteon's face might be a slight bit confusing (though I didn't think about that when I first saw it) Otherwise, great!
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I think what the sylveon is holding is the jolteons ears.
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But don't you think sylveon would be looking into jolt's eyes? Then what would the point of using those puppy-dog eyes be? And plus in the next frame, they're face to face
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Maybe she's holding the jolteons paws? It's either the ears, or the paws.
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Yeah, i was guessing the paws but it's hard to tell with the way they're drawn, so next time the artist could make it a bit more clear
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Thank for letting me know.
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I think that it's fine. You don't see that Sylveon is actually centered in the frame, making her the main focus of the panel. I think it would look less appealing if she was brought up some since that would take away from her being so noticeable. Her mouth being open and Jolteon not having a mouth indicates that Sylveon is talking in this panel. I'm all up for some constructive criticism, but I don't see the problem. I was able to read it no problem. I would suggest trying some line depth to see how it looks in your style, I think it would make your characters pop out even more. Keep up the great work!
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This is adorable! Β The layout worked well.
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Oh my gawd XD!
You cannot defeat the adorabelness Sylveon haves!
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IN ORDER TO BEAT IT.... We need a flareon.
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Flareon, Its fuggin adorable.
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Not as adorable as Eevee
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Yes eevee is more cute
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*Pulls out angela's pokeball* EVEN THIS EEVEE?!?!?!?
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Angela : SHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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So cute!!! ^^ I can totally tell what that Jolteon is thinking.
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Yep, too bloody cute
LOL get it?
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awww who can resist that face XD
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