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Published: 2005-09-17 05:15:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 255; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 15
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Description From another realm, I feel your touch
Icy cold, it hurts so much
I feel you, I know that you're still here
But I can't hold you
Can't have you near
I reach for your hand
Inside the shadow
I fight the never-ending battle
The nights I wake
And call your name
All the times I cried
You never came
The times I've thought
It was only a dream
Only to remember your dying screams
You'll never leave me
But you'll never be here
I'll love you eternally
My ghost
My dear
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Comments: 25

Laura-AH [2005-10-19 01:31:31 +0000 UTC]

This is so eerie and ghost like. Beautiful words in the description as well. Very creative.

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EverBroken In reply to Laura-AH [2005-10-19 14:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much... that's exactly what I was going for. I'm glad you liked the words, I always try to put thought and heart into them.

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airbornemail [2005-10-11 14:24:50 +0000 UTC]

Cool photo its self explenative, very strong poem

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EverBroken In reply to airbornemail [2005-10-11 14:52:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, very much. Glad you liked it!

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renia-vandolrin [2005-10-03 01:24:25 +0000 UTC]

You have a very great way of expressing yourself its so clear. Great job with the picture as well.

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EverBroken In reply to renia-vandolrin [2005-10-03 19:40:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SO much, I really appreciate your comments.

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renia-vandolrin In reply to EverBroken [2005-10-04 23:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Your so welcome! I enjoy commenting on your work.

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EverBroken In reply to renia-vandolrin [2005-10-05 03:04:34 +0000 UTC]

And I appreciate it.

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Mattysgirl [2005-09-19 18:09:22 +0000 UTC]

That is so beautiful! So simple, but the most simpliest things can be amazingly beautiful.

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EverBroken In reply to Mattysgirl [2005-09-19 19:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I agree.... simple can be beautiful.

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Mattysgirl In reply to EverBroken [2005-09-20 23:04:11 +0000 UTC]

I am so sorry I never, read the poem, I was short of scamming through the comments
to tell what I thought....but as usual it is absouluty...amazing! I love it! AnD I bet you like my new avatar...lol! and no problem, you deserve it!

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EverBroken In reply to Mattysgirl [2005-09-21 00:50:45 +0000 UTC]

It's okay. Glad you love it! And yes, once again... that avatar is awesome.

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NemesisInRed [2005-09-18 10:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Great photo! I love the blurry darkness, the only thing that's bothering me is the light below the hand - itwould be so perfect without it but I do think it deserves a fav

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EverBroken In reply to NemesisInRed [2005-09-20 04:54:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you SO much for the ! Yeah, that light is from the cut of the glass that the light is reflecting through. It made this little prism thing. I wish I had a photo editing program so I could take it out. But again, thank you SO much!

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Xenodia [2005-09-18 07:58:18 +0000 UTC]

wow the image is very nice. Darkness is very present, but it fits so nicely it's beautiful. Great job with both the pic and the poem. I love it!

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EverBroken In reply to Xenodia [2005-09-19 19:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, Carrie! I'm so glad that you like it so much and that you saw fit to it! Your comments always mean so much to me!

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Xenodia In reply to EverBroken [2005-09-19 19:41:49 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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Veni-Vidi-Vegi [2005-09-17 23:08:39 +0000 UTC]

wooow..that's awsome. How did u do the lighting?

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EverBroken In reply to Veni-Vidi-Vegi [2005-09-18 03:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Random. I was at a friend's house and saw it coming through their glass door, which has this filmy curtain hanging over it. I put my hand up and saw how neat the shadow looked and ran and got my camera. Thank you SOOOO much for the awesome comment and the !!!!

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Beautifull-Freak [2005-09-17 05:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. Beautiful poem!! And the picture is very well taken

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EverBroken In reply to Beautifull-Freak [2005-09-17 15:45:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I'm thrilled that you like them both!

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Beautifull-Freak In reply to EverBroken [2005-09-17 20:38:54 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome Gal!!

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Sloan47 [2005-09-17 05:19:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very powerful Nikki. Your poem fits perfectly with the image. I had a slight chill go up my spine!

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EverBroken In reply to Sloan47 [2005-09-17 05:33:48 +0000 UTC]

YAY! T'was the whole point, so thank you so much! I love this picture for some reason..... I like creepy things. Hehe.

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Sloan47 In reply to EverBroken [2005-09-17 05:35:48 +0000 UTC]



You're welcome!

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