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EverBroken — Strangle Me

Published: 2005-06-25 21:01:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 292; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 8
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Description Choking, dying
My last breath
You strangle me
Until nothing is left
You take from me
Everything I own
And I give it to you
Because I'm afraid to be alone
Bitter pain
Agonizing death
It will all be better
When there's nothing left
No single trace
Of a life past
Strangle me, but not too fast
Make it slow
I want to feel
To know the life I lived
Was real
Strangle me
Choke me with your lies
Strangle me
Until I close my eyes
And say
My empty goodbyes
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Comments: 25

renia-vandolrin [2005-06-26 18:27:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow I think that tree looks kind of cool with all those vines on it, but after awhile it could get a lil clostrophobic *If thats how you spell it* But your poem brings that picture to life and Im sure that thats what the tree is thinking, I would hate having all that all over me it would be suffocating...But anyways, Great job!!

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EverBroken In reply to renia-vandolrin [2005-06-27 05:02:49 +0000 UTC]

I know, I thought that too! It was so pretty, but I also thought, "poor tree"! I've felt like that before... a bit choked by some things and people in my life.

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renia-vandolrin In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 22:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah Its a really awesome picture. Yeah its easy to get choked up by the small things in life I think. Its not hard to do at all Ive done it so many times ive lost count

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Marcher [2005-06-26 01:34:33 +0000 UTC]

aww,beautifully written,and a beautiful photo!!

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EverBroken In reply to Marcher [2005-06-27 05:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much! I'm so glad that you liked it so well! Thanks a bunch for the !!

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Xenodia [2005-06-26 00:29:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, what an overgrown tree! (That sounded funny) Newhoozits...That's a cool pic, I like how it looks all over crowded, it goes with the poem perfectly because of that. I think it's time for a trimmin' though!

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EverBroken In reply to Xenodia [2005-06-27 05:24:17 +0000 UTC]

That did sound funny! And yes, I agree.... I think this tree needs to be cut loose from some of its strangling vine "friends". Poor thing.

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Sloan47 [2005-06-25 23:55:46 +0000 UTC]

Aww... that poor tree! That's going to really hurt it with all that growing on its side! I had to cut away a ton of large branches that were growing off the side of my tree in the front of my house. They were killing the poor thing.

Great job as usual with the poem and the photo!

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EverBroken In reply to Sloan47 [2005-06-27 05:27:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! Yeah, the poor tree. I was out for a walk one day and saw it. I felt sorry for the poor guy, because I feel like that sometimes. Strangled by problems or people who like to smother me.

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Sloan47 In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 05:35:57 +0000 UTC]



It was so funny too... I wanted to help this tree, but it saw me coming at it with an axe... if it could see me, I'm sure I scared the bark out of it.

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EverBroken In reply to Sloan47 [2005-06-27 07:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Scared the bark out of it! That's great!

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Sloan47 In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-28 04:36:04 +0000 UTC]

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Beautifull-Freak [2005-06-25 22:02:39 +0000 UTC]

ALL THAT GREEN!! It's like paradise!! Beautiful!!

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EverBroken In reply to Beautifull-Freak [2005-06-27 05:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I'm so glad you liked it so much! Thanks for the , sweetie!

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Beautifull-Freak In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 06:55:25 +0000 UTC]

Truely, it's beautiful..

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EverBroken In reply to Beautifull-Freak [2005-06-27 07:31:40 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you hun!

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Beautifull-Freak In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 07:33:40 +0000 UTC]

whoa you're online! >< Im at school.. Well, good night to you!

oh yeh, and welcomes!

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EverBroken In reply to Beautifull-Freak [2005-06-27 07:34:28 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I'm up too late! Need to go to bed soon. G'night dear, have a great day!

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Beautifull-Freak In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 07:35:19 +0000 UTC]

Yay!! I wish I could've been online, but nooooo.. I had to go to school! (I'm doing NOTHING now, except this..)

School can be fun

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EverBroken In reply to Beautifull-Freak [2005-06-27 07:36:20 +0000 UTC]

Darn school! It's so inconvenient! But, at least you're not busy with lots of work!

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Beautifull-Freak In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 07:38:49 +0000 UTC]

XD Actually, I should get going and learn for that test I have to do the next hour.. *slaps butt* Get going, you lazy girl!

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EverBroken In reply to Beautifull-Freak [2005-06-27 07:40:38 +0000 UTC]

Oooo, a test! Good luck! I'm sure you'll do fine though, you're a smart girl! *rolls up newspaper and taps you on butt* Get goin' girl!

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Beautifull-Freak In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 07:43:11 +0000 UTC]

Haha *goes* I'm really going now!

Nice to sort of have spoken to you again!!!! See ya!

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EverBroken In reply to Beautifull-Freak [2005-06-27 07:44:33 +0000 UTC]

Have a great day! I'm really going too! *goes*

Oh, and nice having kind of spoken to you again too!

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Beautifull-Freak In reply to EverBroken [2005-06-27 10:45:56 +0000 UTC]

Okay have a nice night!! *little late, but blah*

XD

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