ViCaelestis [2009-07-02 00:19:16 +0000 UTC]

*dances while juggling*

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JenniferStarling [2009-07-01 19:24:57 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you're keeping up with your regular poem/month routine. You're learning to do a lot with a little.

As far as crit- Though this stands alone, it also could work very well in the future as the last stanza to a longer piece. Right now the ambiguity leaves it possible for this poem to tell several stories, and some are more compelling than others.

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