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evilabnormalvamp — May 2009
Published: 2009-05-30 02:20:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 55; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description once over once under
none of that seems to
matter when I am
holding you

no quiet whisper
reckless
I am restless
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Comments: 6

JenniferStarling [2009-06-16 11:00:45 +0000 UTC]

Love the last two lines especially.

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Vhojre [2009-05-30 15:39:35 +0000 UTC]

second that first comment - short and sweet. the brevity suits the rhythm, the poem says what it means and ends.

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evilabnormalvamp In reply to Vhojre [2009-06-02 15:57:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, very much. =]

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TheMadMulatto [2009-05-30 03:58:44 +0000 UTC]

Very sweet. Elegant in it's brief admission.

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evilabnormalvamp In reply to TheMadMulatto [2009-06-02 15:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy this little piece of me. =]

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TheMadMulatto In reply to evilabnormalvamp [2009-06-02 17:40:34 +0000 UTC]

yep!

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