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EvilD — Completion [NSFW]
Published: 2005-04-10 12:24:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 45; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I enter my home
The door slams behind me,
Plagued by questions,
"Did you have a good time?"
"Where'd you go, what you do?"
Answered with little emotion
Then to my room I go.

I go online and check on my friends,
Through blogs, LJ and Bebo
Only to find out what I didn't want to.
I found out they'd had fun,
They'd all got together and a great time,
Without me.

I let the warm water flow into my bath,
Filling itself to the brim.
I take my razor and look in the mirror,
One last time to see me at my worst.
The light begins to fade,
Next I here beeps followed by
Flatline.

On my funeral day I can see it now,
Myself lying in the casket,
Surrounded by family who are sad
It's a shame that my friends are here,
When they could be having fun without me.
I have returned to the earth,
I am now complete.
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Comments: 5

afinlay [2005-06-20 10:06:51 +0000 UTC]

Very intersesting

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flawed-helix [2005-04-27 18:00:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is twisted... I like it. Good job.

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EvilD In reply to flawed-helix [2005-04-28 14:37:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you kindly.

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o-t4ng [2005-04-11 00:23:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG dude. That is so good. Easily one of your best.

Sorry you feel that way though. It is tough feeling left out. I should know!! Don't worry, man. I'm just as left out as you. We can make our own loop... oh wait we already have.

Anyway, excellente peom my man.

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EvilD In reply to o-t4ng [2005-04-11 00:27:02 +0000 UTC]

I can always count on you man to apperciate me work, I'm glad you like it, keep the faith

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