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EvilD — To kill another
Published: 2005-05-02 08:46:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Alone I stand at my post
My gun held up,
Searching for my target.
In the mist I see a man,
I look through my scope
He is the enemy,
I must do my job.
So I hold my gun up high,
I take aim for his heart,
My grip on the trigger tightens
This is it,
The last moment of life.
*BANG*
He falls to the ground
Without a sound.
"Confirm the kill"
Thats what we were told.
So I go through the mist
To where he once stood.
I look down on to realise,
He was just a kid.
He was surely only 17.
I had not only killed another,
I had killed a child,
Not even in his prime.
I look at my gun,
My hand begins to shake.
I collapse to the ground,
Tear flood to my eyes,
I screamed out loud,
"Why a child, why wasn't I told!"
So again I raise my gun high,
Take aim once more,
*BANG*
No more do I cry,
No more do I wonder why,
No more do I stay,
No more do I live.
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Comments: 7

afinlay [2005-06-20 10:05:16 +0000 UTC]

FANTASTIC!....That is really awsome great work!

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EvilD In reply to afinlay [2005-06-20 12:08:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks very much.

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afinlay In reply to EvilD [2005-06-20 12:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Its Okay

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Erinys6 [2005-05-02 22:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Very effective and emotive. Perfect.

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EvilD In reply to Erinys6 [2005-05-03 09:56:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the great comment

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o-t4ng [2005-05-02 12:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Dude, that it awesome.

Beautifaully written. Very deep as well.

What's up? Or was it just a flash of inspiration?

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EvilD In reply to o-t4ng [2005-05-03 09:58:02 +0000 UTC]

Just went with a muse, I have unlocked a rather useful little tool, I can get myself to go into different "moods" to write poems then snap out of them, I'm actaully in a damn good mood

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