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evilded777 β BKB9 Fuller and Red The First Kiss
Published: 2016-10-17 00:23:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1001; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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"What did you do that for?""You saved my life. Besides you looked like you could use one and I didn't think you were going to make the first move."
"I would have."
"Sure, you keep telling yourself that, big guy. How 'bout another?"
"Yes. Please."
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Thanks, I always look forward to your critiques. I see what you mean about the shirt. Dressing Fuller is hard. Β And the thing about Red... well, he's a little socially awkward and for all his bravado and snappy banter, he's not very forward. Put a sword in his hand, he knows what to do. A handsome young man... not so much.
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LOVE the pose and lighting on this one, my friend! I also love the curly hair! It really catches the light. The only thing that doesn't work for me is the texture on the shirt. There's too much warping around the elbow. If you removed the bump map, this would be a case where less detail is actually more beneficial. I am really taken by the intimacy of this scene, but can't help feeling that Red's right hand should be down a little lower, maybe cupping a cheek.
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