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Published: 2010-06-21 15:50:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 3877; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 38
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I blame absolutely EVERYBODY for this
.I don't think it deserves warning because nothing's happening...yet. Lots of mistakes...but meh, I've had my fangasm
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You should read "Breaking Free" on FF.net. It's VERY slashy, but it's good.
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I am reading it right now, in fact, right here on DA! But thanks for the suggestion anyway
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Did you get my comment on "No longer Mine"? I asked if that was a slash. It didn't have a vibe of "slash", but it says it's featured in "TF slash" group. Maybe I was wrong. Either way, I loved it!
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Yes, and as it turns out in the later chapters, it's a slash fic ...(I honestly didn't know that it'll turn out THIS slashy, I've never exactly plan a plot for my fic LOL.)
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Skyfire/Starscream? (Go ahead and tell me via "note" if you want.)
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Well, currently I've uploaded part 16 and working on part 17. I would've told you about what happened after that, but I can't - simply because I don't know either what's going to happen. I never have decent plots whenever I start a chapter and just gone along as the story progresses...Anyway, yes, it's currently SkyfirexStarscream.
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I knew it! I like how you explained how Screamer's voice is so screwed up. No one has ever did this before. Kudos
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Thank you! I thought that I owe him the explanation XD. It's his most famost attribute, after all.
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There's not alot of abused D-con stories. This one was very depressing.
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I know. I've read lots of abused Autobots in fics, but not much Decepticons (though there are lots on abused Starscream, and mine is just adding more to the list XD)
...so I take it that it's a good thing that I make a depressing story? I hope so. But don't worry if you're sad now, I shall remedy all that in the end!
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:woot: Someone should make an abused Megatron one.(It might be a cop-out for him being so evil, it would be interesting.)
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It would, and one scene or another with Megatron being bottomed pop into my mind once in a while, but I haven't got the time to draw yet...
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Megatron being spanked.Hm.. Which version? G1?
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not in the official cartoons...just in my mind XD. My sick, twisted mind.
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I meant what version will you portray him in? You could have Armada Megatron spank a chibi Starscream.
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I always visualize G1, actually. armada is cool, I admit, but I don't know why, it seems that G1 hols more appeal to me.
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Some people have seen G1 pics where it "could" be sexual or non-sexual. Like in some random battle, one of the Autobots fall onto another in a "position". Post it up on youtube (or here) and slap the "slash" label on it. I swear everything is about sex nowadays.
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I'm not sure myself. If there is, though, I'm not going to be able to finish it quickly...life is getting a bit busy now
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Oh gosh,this reminds me of the past..but it shure came out nice!
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Oh i saw this picture, and i thought it might help when you decide to draw Starscream nxt time. 
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Thanks very much for the link
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I like the idea and the way you told the story, but there are some aspects that could use some changes.
Starscream's helm, in panels 1 & 3 are out of proportion. the side helm is much bigger than the part above his forehead, which gives the face a very awkward rectangular shape, and the above forehead section should be much more protruding, until it resembles a protective helmet. His Nose is incredibly long, especially in panel one. In the 2nd last panel, it looks much more proportionate.
Oh wow. I LOVE the panel where the shilouttes of Megatron and Starscream are against the wall. The outlines are great. Very Dramatic.
I would like to know though, why are there small lines on their necks? Never seen anyone draw them with those before.
Also, in Comics/ Illustrated stories such as these, the few dialogs in it are extremely important and play a major impression on the readers. Your last few panels are a very good exmple of something short, but impactful. The first line in panel 2 however, sounds off. I think something like "I've Had Just About Enough Of You!"? or jsut somethign that flows more smoothly.
Sorry if I seem like I'm nitpicking, but i think you have some great ideas and could go long with this if you continue to improve
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Now that you mention it...yeah, they are out of proportion. I should be more careful next time! That nose...er, I have to admit that I like making long noses. Seems like I'm getting out of control this time...>_<
Thanks, I enjoy doing that panel very much!
Which line? At the base or along the necks? If at the base...I was just experimenting how it'll look there. If along...well, I just like the idea of wires and cables making up the neck section.
LOL the first few panels are a pain in my ass!!! I just have no idea what to put it so I just kinda throwing stuffs there 
No need to sorry at all! Your insights are very useful to me!
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Hahahaha long noses. thats funny.
Oh I see. Wires and cables in the neck.. Few artists do that, i think its harder? But if done well it's pretty epic. Good luck with that.
Glad to be of help!
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I know, but I can't help it LOL
I know wires and cables and stuffs are a lot harder to make...but I'll start drawing the TFs so because I want to learn and practice early.
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Now I have a bit of time to comment.
Shading is good. I like that little bit of shading on Megatron's chest angle and arm in the lower left corner. That can be hard is to get the light angle on that part but you did very well on that! Whatever mistakes you did I don't see them right off. I sometimes think we can be our own worst judges on our own art. I am very happy you are posting more here.
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Thanks for sparing time to comment, I appreciate it very much
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Not sure whether there will be a next page...but my pervy mind is insisting me to
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There's no stopping the force of perviness
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Nope! It's like "The Blob", only more sticky and consuming.
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your are welcome
you shold do more is great..XD
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