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Published: 2005-12-06 05:11:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 268; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description You find
More clearly
A representation
Of your loving nature
In the ebb and flow of tides
Star beams and bolts of lightening
Rather than his eyes
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flappability [2005-12-09 06:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Somehow.. I really really find this interesting!

Yeah! This reminds me somehow of those all-the-sudden spontaneous thoughts that hop into your head at the least likeliest time. Like when you're taking a shower or poooping brown opals -- and all the sudden a poetic idea forces you to jump to your pen all of the sudden.
Well it's like that for me.

And I love how you rhymed the third last & the last line.

AHHHHHHHHH...aldfjalfdja

fine!

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