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falleninterlude — this is how it feels
Published: 2004-10-13 05:35:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 655; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 31
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So the other day my friend Jen was talking about how she loves the butterfly feeling you get when you first meet someone, y'know when you can't wait to see and talk to them. This of course sparked the idea for this picture. There are far too many problems with it starting with the hands. And then there are the colours, which I like but am not sure are the best support for the image. Still I'm rather fond of it, and so may do another fixed version of it. Unless of course it keeps on annoying me like it has been in which case I'll just have to be satisfied with it.photoshop
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Well looks like a good concept and looks like you're getting better at using photoshop ^_^
I think you should do a "fixed up" version just because I like the concept so much...not sure why, but I like it
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I'm rather fond of the concept myself. I think I will do a fixed up version. The hands for sure need fixing and a bunch of other things. Have any suggestions?
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Well, one thing I'd change is the skirt, to me, it seems to poofy at the waist area. It's almost like there's a puff of air under her skirt that won't leave and it differs alot from the tighter clothing of the upper body and doesn't quite flow through.
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Hmm that may be so. I intended for it to just be a full skirt, but it may indeed be too poofy. What about colours? Do you think these suit the picture?
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Well it's not so much the poofy-ness overall of the skirt but rather, the buldging of the sides of the skirt at the top of the skirt near the waist, it just seems to defy gravity.
I mean shouldn't a skirt flow downwards smoothly?
I think the colours of the clothing are fine, I might use a "warmer" colour for the background to help induce a "warm fuzzy feeling" that the picture is seemingly an emobiment of.
And maybe change the facial expression? She seems rather emotionless as of now, I dunno how...maybe close her eyes or something
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Hmmm, yeah I see what you mean about the skirti should probably rein it in a little. I just can't seem to make up my mind when it comes to these things poofy skirt at the top, flowing skirt at the bottom. So much for continuity. I don't want to close her eyes cause she is supposed to be looking down at the butterflies but maybe i'll change something else, maybe make her smiling a bit? What do you think?
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Well doesn't really matter if you don't want her eyes closed, it was just a thought that came out of my lack of suggestions.
Maybe have her smiling shyly, looking down, blushing maybe?
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so cute, you used photoshop? looks like markers, cool technique
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i'm feeling that butterfly feeling right now...
its a crush...
and hmmm love??
candy
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