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FallenLilith96 — Pretty Twisted Picture
Published: 2013-01-08 03:21:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 250; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description I paint a pretty landscape
It spreads
I paint a pretty sky
I paint it up high
I paint a pretty tree
One, two, three...
I paint a pretty sun
I'm almost done
I paint a pretty grave
It's engraved
I paint a pretty star
Now this picture looks bizarre

I saved this stroke for last
Because it's the stroke that makes me forget my past

I painted this pretty picture
Now a fountain has appeared
Its spilling, flowing, gushing
With this picture my problems disappear

At least that's what I thought
Staring at this twisted picture I drew
And how I wish you knew
I painted this picture because of you

Now I painted a pretty picture
But you see this picture has a twist
I painted this picture
With a razor as my brush
And my canvas as my wrist

And if only they knew about this painting
That is scarred along my wrist
Maybe then someone would have realized
I no longer want to exist

I know that you are hurt
But please bury me in the dirt
And on my grave
Place a pure white dove
To warn this world, I died for love

Now this painting is finished
It's covered in red
Looking at it, I begin to cry
You didn't have to break my heart, and I didn't have to die.

Your life wasn't all bad
What about all the future memories we should have made?
And the hope we had?
Your life was what you paid
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Comments: 18

Dragon1600 [2013-01-18 18:16:03 +0000 UTC]

Should have seen this before i replied to your message -.-

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FallenLilith96 In reply to Dragon1600 [2013-01-19 00:10:20 +0000 UTC]

its okay. ill tell you everything in my other message

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gothicprincess18 [2013-01-08 03:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful... Seriously beautiful... And the lines \with a razor as my brush-my canvas as my wrist/ that is my absoulute favorite (and most relatable) part.

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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-08 03:26:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
I know how you feel. Life isn't easy and everyone keeps breaking my heart. But life can only get better right?
Thanks for the fave too

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gothicprincess18 In reply to FallenLilith96 [2013-01-08 03:33:04 +0000 UTC]

Np, and im sure it does. Eventually and how could i not save it? Its like you were speaking my mind.

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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-08 03:39:05 +0000 UTC]

yeah
Hehe thanks appreciate it.
Well we both just know what hell is like <3

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gothicprincess18 In reply to FallenLilith96 [2013-01-08 04:04:05 +0000 UTC]

Unfortanatly

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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-08 04:13:45 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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gothicprincess18 In reply to FallenLilith96 [2013-01-08 04:29:11 +0000 UTC]


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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-08 04:46:24 +0000 UTC]

haha thats awesome

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gothicprincess18 In reply to FallenLilith96 [2013-01-08 04:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I mainly type random stuff and see if it works. Its entertaining.

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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-08 05:01:16 +0000 UTC]

lol that is awesome. I should try that

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gothicprincess18 In reply to FallenLilith96 [2013-01-08 22:25:02 +0000 UTC]

It provides a good distraction

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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-09 07:10:50 +0000 UTC]

hehe yeah

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gothicprincess18 In reply to FallenLilith96 [2013-01-09 10:33:16 +0000 UTC]

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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-09 11:25:40 +0000 UTC]

^.^

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gothicprincess18 In reply to FallenLilith96 [2013-01-12 00:05:05 +0000 UTC]

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FallenLilith96 In reply to gothicprincess18 [2013-01-12 01:00:30 +0000 UTC]

^-^

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