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fallin-anjil — Fader
Published: 2002-10-24 03:24:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 169; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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Gleaming.Endless sky
Why do you decieve me,
Streaking.
Blue eyes
Why dont you believe me,
Surfacing.
Hidden lies
My word is Nothing to you.
This.
Everlasting Parallel
Our Fates have somehow beaten,
My.
Foolish Heart
It just stopped beating,
Your.
Harsh words
Breaking the binds between us.
Natural.
Last impressions
Etched into our minds,
Revenge.
So sweet
Ahead of it's own time,
Fading...
Forgotten Sparks
gleaming
streaking
surfacing
its (natural)...
my (revenge),
your (fading).
natural
revenge
fading...
Endless sky
Why do you decieve me,
Blue eyes
Why dont you believe me,
Hidden lies
My word is Nothing to you.
Everlasting Parallel
Our Fates have somehow beaten,
Foolish Heart
It just stopped beating,
Harsh words
Breaking the binds between us.
Last impressions
Etched into our minds,
So sweet
Ahead of it's own time,
Forgotten Sparks
Fading into ashes.
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Comments: 6
You have some really great writing skills. However if you lose those kills at the expense of being happy, then I look forward to the day you can no longer write.
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nice poem, seems pretty lyrical. Also, interesting form, it flowed well with the piece.
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beautiful. its my favorite that you've shown me too. it has the feminine sense of beauty and a bit vulnerability, but one that stings. hehe i know what thats like. damn girls.
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i can picture this as a song man
i like that way you wrote it your style is great
it flows really nice
keep it up
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