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FallingForYou — Fall Into Shadows
Published: 2006-03-07 01:45:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description And you’ve just got another messed up resolution.
Another chance for you to be who you wish you were.
Can’t it be the way we were when we could imagine?
When imagination wasn’t hindered by the time on the clock
or the the way we all feel how we should function.

Would it be so bad to cloak the earth in a shade of red?
Find that everyone truly is as messed and sad as you
Hiding under false interpretations.
And maybe beauty is really the pain that we hide.
Maybe the blue of the sky
the richness of what was created for us
is just a reminder of how badly we want what we can't have.

So work for what you only wish you could obtain.
Sit back and let what is unfair control your world.
Because there’s just too many people,
And too many chances for complete chaos,
That if we could control our own destiny’s
Why aren’t more of us where we thought we’d be by now?

Make a statement,
get your 15 minutes,
and fall into the shadows of everyone who will come after you.
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Comments: 9

DEZERTER579z [2009-03-05 03:31:02 +0000 UTC]

i love this poem, your work is a lot like mine, maybe you should read some of my poetry!!

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FallingForYou In reply to DEZERTER579z [2009-04-06 07:28:43 +0000 UTC]

I'll try to swing by and take a look at your stuff soon.

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DEZERTER579z In reply to FallingForYou [2009-04-06 10:49:06 +0000 UTC]

alright, thank you.

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Ikkin00 [2006-06-27 00:46:45 +0000 UTC]

I really admire anyone with talent in writing.
A picture may say a thousand words.
But words are harder to compile.
If that makes any sense.

I like this.

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FallingForYou In reply to Ikkin00 [2006-06-27 00:50:37 +0000 UTC]

it's very true, words are harder to compile... thank you for appreciating what it may take to write something like this. I'm glad you like.

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puwen [2006-03-13 08:21:28 +0000 UTC]

love the concept!

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despisetolive [2006-03-07 02:54:49 +0000 UTC]

It's amazing :hugs:

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FallingForYou In reply to despisetolive [2006-03-13 07:58:19 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you!

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MemoryFinder [2006-03-07 01:52:35 +0000 UTC]

i think, if you and aj were here, my life would be extremely better. other than that, i have no thoughts. lol

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