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Published: 2007-11-10 09:08:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 415; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 1
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It's a little Vanessa CarltonTen thousand miles I'd walk for you
And you should have seen me yesterday
So happy
I thought life was just so perfect.
It's a little Evanescence
You know you like to make me bleed
And the promises you cannot keep
So broken
These tears just fall too frequently.
And this rollercoaster's going just a little to fast
The ups the downs, I can't hold on much longer
And just when I think you and me are finally a family
I have to sit back and wonder
Am I really happy?
It's a little Kelly Clarkson
This could break my heart or save me
I give second chances and give my heart
So easily
I feel a little bit abused.
It's a little Jimmy Eat World
You kill me, you always know the perfect thing to say
And I'm back into your arms again
So warm
Hoping that there will never be another
Rollercoaster is going just a little too fast
The ups the downs, I can't hold on much longer
And just when I think you and me are finally a family
I have to sit back and wonder
Am I really happy?
Or maybe it's just a little Dashboard Confessional
And I'll convince you soon, that I am just fine.
Comments: 9
InnovationFire [2007-11-14 19:43:07 +0000 UTC]
Im not too sure about the last line of them, it seems to break the flow for me.
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FallingForYou In reply to InnovationFire [2007-12-11 02:56:41 +0000 UTC]
I understand what you mean... *thinks about an alternate way of ending the poem* Thank you.
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forevafallin [2007-11-13 02:53:02 +0000 UTC]
i like it a lot. the references to people are done so perfectly.and i like the rollercoaster chorus. its great.
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FallingForYou In reply to forevafallin [2007-12-11 02:56:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, very much.
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