HOME | DD
fallingobsession — My Escape
Published: 2004-03-20 03:59:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
Redirect to original
Description
The sun shinesWarmth on my back
I’ve got the scars to show it
The permanent cuts...
It’ll always hurt me
Damaging forever
‘Til the day I die.
And even after I’ll shrivel,
Faster
Faster
Hidden from the shadows,
The Coolness
My escape...
Can you take me to my hide-away?
Will you bring me to my haunted mansion,
And protect me from the ghosts?
Change my world to that fantasy...
You’re my knight in shining armor
But you’re dissolving with my dreams...
Related content
Comments: 14
It's so pretty!!!! And so are you! *points at the piccy* I really like the last line...awww...wow!!! ^_^
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thankies brie!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I like te last line it well sums up a lot of what people go through and how they feel in moments of despair
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yeah... I dunno... I don't reallly remember what happened that night, but.... Hm.. No, no thoughts.... And uhhh, I better get some sleep... So... off to take my showers... 
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
the last line is my favorite 
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Yeah. Damn nephews and their not sending me the program.... *grumbles*
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I liked the last line. Did you know that rêve is French for dream? Like reverie.
Dissolving with your dreams.
I suppose I just thought it was beautiful and then I rambled on about French 'cause the French word for dream is beautiful too.
*pause*
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Aw, that's so pretty, too!! Reve w. that cool looking thingy I'm too lazy to find... Yeah.. Lazy. Hyper for show then lazy... Cya tomorrow! *waves*
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
this is really good and unlike alot of nonstructured poems it flows good job
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
wow dani, thats great!!! I totaly love it! The picture is interesting, I would have tinited it red or something but thats me!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
yeah i woulda done something cooler w/ the damn pic too except my freakin program doesnt work right and wouldnt let me do ANYTHING. i finally gave up and just did B&W rawr
👍: 0 ⏩: 1