notrust [2004-01-27 01:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Short poems must be your strong point...this is amazing, especially the ending...it left me breathless

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isnevertimeatall [2004-01-20 05:19:46 +0000 UTC]

its a sucker punch right where the gun is aimed. Few things hit me like this poem did. congrats on a great poem, now I'm going to go cry...

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silentscream [2004-01-18 15:49:08 +0000 UTC]

ah, short poems own. it's hard to make such an impact with only a few words, but it seems you've pulled it off. lovely.

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lamentingkid [2004-01-18 01:56:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the tip. still the best way is decapitation. a guillotine can't be beat.

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xxxfearofperfectionx [2004-01-17 11:03:11 +0000 UTC]

your starting to sound like me..haha not really i like this tho maybe you should make something longer out of it..or just keep it the same..haha
rusty

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lesseroflindsey [2004-01-16 23:40:11 +0000 UTC]

you already know I love it. I would like the honor to say I am your biggest fan haha wait i just came up with a mean and cruel joke..hehehe about someone we know good stuff.
haha this comment is longer than the poem

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