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Published: 2007-01-29 04:40:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1117; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 2
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a break down of faust's develpment.also a neat partisan thingy. i need ideas for mystical attributes. ya know, lazer beams and magic bubble beams and shit.
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any suggestions i had suck. i clearly don't know enough about the character to suggest, but i am compelled to say i like the design and by reading other comments, this sounds like a really interesting story.
shit, now i gotta look through your gallery even more wooha!
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You really need to not rip off team ico's designs, his younger appearance is pretty much a dead rip of wanderer from shadow of the colossus. Stop it.
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it's kind of a dojin in a sence.
i've been making this comic to explore the world of Ico and SotC. that world is my favorite in all fantasy out there and i really wanted to see more of it. so i made my own story for the land filled with curses. that's why young faust is wearing the same kind of clothes wanda, ico, and the gaurds wear. because everyone has tunics and cloaks.
but now my friend and i have an original story plotted out for faust and shade so im giving up on the fancomic. now faust looks like this~ [link] and has his own world of wonder.
so don't worry. i stopped. even though i don't see the problem with dojins.
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I like your design for the partisan quite a bit. The change in clothing is a nice touch. The outfit for his younger self looks much more suited for nature and innocence whereas the current one with the mostly black coloring suites a darker and older persona.
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mmm...i'm actually re-re-redesigning this character as we speak... i can't leave him a lone.
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He is one hot 16 year old...
Why can't the guys at school look like that???
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i don't like fan girls much, but thanks.
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I said I really like the hair! Its very unique!
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it's just like allen walker's from D.Grey Man. so it's not that unique.
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It is for people who have no idea what you're talking about like myself. Anywho i still really like it!
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perhaps just something simple but used in an unusual way. like commanding water. aside from basic water spells, i say try something that absorbs water from a human being drying them up like a raisin. to balance it out though id try throwing something that would make it a little harder. like perhaps it being some sort of attachment spell an contact with the targets blood by piercing the skin . and once he absorbs it he can use it as a part of a regular water spell.
And seeing as how his staff is bladed, it gives the impression that hes a combat mage of sorts. so i would imagine that he would have at least basic combat skills.
they can ether support the magic or the magic support his fighting. an example of a cool way to use combat supporting magic would be like perhaps he needs to wound the enemy in particular spots to cast a certain spell like a type of homing spell that need the persons blood to home in on them.
an example of magic supporting combat would be simple elemental attachments or short but effective spells that can be cast while fighting.
his horns suggest hes obviously not wholy human which makes for some flexibility. you should try to take advantage of that for any other extras you want to throw on.
thats it from me. an im sure you've shown him and his history before, but i remember NOTHING.
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yeah, yeah! that's good, i like it. if i made it a little more aquatic looking.
the "staff" is actually a partisan... like a shaolin spade. and it's just one of many ideas i have for artifacts Faust finds on his quests.
faust has horns and small pointed ears cuz he's a shaori. shaoris are like like, part orc, gnomb, elf, and wyvern. shaori's are made of the leftovers of each of those races. my friend and i have a big story about it already.
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actually, i would keep the aquatic elements out. or at least keep them subtle. if he's had an opportunity to find artifacts, i'm sure hes had opportunities to find spells. not to mention most people don't look like they know the things they do.
shaori, ive never heard its name before. in what way is it used in combat?
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i see what your saying...
c...combat?
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XD
i figured it was one of those weapons that were orginaly used for other purposes. like the nunchaku or the scythe.
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nonononono shoari is a fictional race like elvan or orc that i made.
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ah, woops. my ears need to be cleaned. :B
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looks great!
as for abilities shooting lighting is always fun!!! or you could have empty slots in the staff and could insert stones to give it diffrent abilities if you cant decide or something like that
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looks great!
as for abilities shooting lighting is always fun!!! or you could have empty slots in the staff and could insert stones to give it diffrent abilities if you cant decide or something like that
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lighting is to pas-se' and ff7 totally covered the slots and materia idea.
i need something revolutionary.
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true true....i wasnt even thinking materia but you got me
........how about.......it emits a beam that can menipulate matter!! ya know you shoot it at some one and it deconstrcts them atom by atom, or you can point it at puddle and harden it into ice and make it spike at enemys that sort of thing?
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well this new beam concept sound's too much like alchemy (fma alchemy) plus is sounds TOO powerful... if there was anyway to minipulate matter it would impossible to lose, faust would just minipulate his opponent inside out...
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..............damn well.......i'm out of ideas.........
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i think you have a good i dea with the staff
and it is a good picture
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it's a partisan, not a staff. staffs dont have large cutting edges at the end.
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true, as a weapons person i should have known that
my bad ^_^
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Are those pom-poms on the staff?..
Telekinesis? More like Pyrokinesis!
Or when it touches the ground it'll make violent earthquakes.
Summon the dead...
Summon monsters to work in your aid.
.. I'll come up with more.
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pom pom's with mystic properties.
how about the staff summons deities of fire? it's like rasing dead monsters made of pyrokinesis... i think it would look cool.
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how about summoning a fire golm that can cause earth quakes
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i was thinking more like made out of fire but okay
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There you go. Perfect combination.
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as in, using the weapon to move other things telekineticly, or moving the weapon with telekenisis?
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Moving the weapon with telekinesis.
Although that's more of a character ability than a weapon ability.
Regardless, it's badass regardless of the weapon.
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