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Published: 2004-06-10 03:44:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 391; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 34
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Description
Acetone talonsdislodging the uncomfort
from between tanned continents.
Painted face
melting in the sun.
A low fat diet
for the low fat girl.
Ah, my dear victim.
Who has done this to you?
Who has defaced your face?
Who gave you that pain?
I would help you
but there is a guilty air
about your glossy lips.
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Comments: 11
I know good poetry when I see it, and this is indeed good poetry. Guilt has never felt so eloquent!
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ah, really like it
you know what we should do with em? destroy, erase & improve
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Dont know about the "Ah, my dear victim." part but the rest is awsome and you dont suck I suck.
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Yeah, I wasn't too sure about that either. I should work that one out. I wrote it and then when I typed it in I fixed it a bunch but I left that part.
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I love the "who has defaced your face?" Part. LOL it's funny because they do it to themselves.
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Hmmm i swear the first few lines will always make me think of some beach slut girl adjusting her thong.....
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What else do you think it's supposed to make you think of?
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poor fem. i wonder why we drive so many to their grave so early with pictures of what none of you will never be, perfect, that is fine with me and my imperfect eye.
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you know i didnt look at you personal info before i sent this response and when i sent it i was hoping that you would be a woman and you were. i hope that my response made sense since somtimes they dont.
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