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Published: 2005-03-14 13:06:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 770; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 15
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A sneak a peek of the Kala I'm doing in collaboration withNow I have to do the metallic shades... wish me luck, cause is the first time I'll try that
suggestions anyone?? (really needed and appreciated)
Edit: HELP WITH THE METAL TEXTURE
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Los espirals en este diseno son bellisimos. Lo da mucha personalidad! Con el metal, todavia lo haces bien, que si esos espirals son en el superficie, y no son seperados del total. ^^V
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tomΓ© la idea de los espirales para el fondo
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El negro de los ojos estΓ‘ bien acentuado, excelente los colores, abemos ke los metales son dificiles de trabajar por eso para la proxima dale mas negro y acentua las luces para lograr contraste, sigue trabajando!!!!!
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Gracias!! tomΓ© en cuenta tu consejo
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Just keep going, like I said before, just work on the skin color. But it's coming along great!!!
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I'll fix the skin, but still the metal thing is not coming how i want it to...
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Well, I am not the best person to show ya that, maybe can help you. I have never really spoken to her, but theis person it a TF God. And she does metal really good.
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WOW O.o muy bien!!! los colores estan perfectos!!
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pero necesito ayuda con la textura metalica T_T
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Looks really good to me. I like the facial expression, it's both fairy-like and flirty, even seductive. The hair is very nice, both the shape and the color. Perhaps you could use more shading there. I like the clothes too. The mouth looks a bit weird to me, it looks too "normal" for a pixie face like that. I'd make the lips plumper trying to retain the sharpness, the same kind of plump but not very wide lips that comic characters often have.
The color of the skin looks somehow dirty, a more saturated color might work better. Something bothers me about the eyebrows, not sure what it is. We humans often try to get our eyebrows to look wing-shaped like here, but some other shape might be more appropriate for this kind of a creature.
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The final version is done
is in my gallery, it would be an honor if you could check it
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See, this is what I like (most) from you! you really take your time to make a critique worthy. The lineart belongs to
I'm still working on the skin color, I also think is not right. I applied the "burn" tool to highlights and midtones (I don't know if you have that tool with that name in PhotoShop) and it got better, I'll be probably posting it in this week. I'm trying to keep loyal to the original lineart, since my part of the collaboration is the color.
Again, thanks for the comment
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that is lovely!!!
Great job!!
Can't wait to see it finished!!
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thanks! it will b done by this weekend
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Your very welcome!!
Can't wait 
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Heavier colours?
Great hair, reminds me of a gigantic tulip.
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EstΓ‘ quedando bien, esmerate en los metales, pero aun asi esta por el buen camino.
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holy bolony batman this is lookin mighty sweet...I can't wait for the finished version...I bet it will be cool
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HOLY !@#$ DUDE! YOU ROCK! so far its lookin good, I would keep working on her skin color though. to give it more of a sweet tone, mor softer and warmer color. and the blush on her cheeks. I know it is not done, but I was just checking.
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I know, i'm also playing with the skin, this one looks too yellow. Her skin is supposed to look like Donatello's... anyways, as u said your self, this is still in progress
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ooh i love the hair.. great colouring well done and good luck with the rest
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If you are using traditional media then try mixing a LITTLE silver with the original colour(but it wouldn't show if you were to scan it. It'll just look like a grey blob... 
But you were to cg it instead then it would be much easier.
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