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Published: 2009-10-22 01:30:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1124; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 31
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Eeeeeerrrrr.... not too proud of these pages.
But the creepy-as-hell Taloris sure were fun. XD

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Comments: 21

MorganTheNightmare [2013-02-06 08:17:17 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA~! That was hilarious~! :3 love love LOVE the expressions~!! c:

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autumncoloredmelodie [2010-02-10 20:17:59 +0000 UTC]

Ignoring the fact that I am an age late on this--

Your faces are really getting consistent and expressive. Your narrative skills are a lot stronger, and your panels are more complex and engaging. I love the repetitive motif here!

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FireflyRaye In reply to autumncoloredmelodie [2010-02-13 04:19:59 +0000 UTC]

*ignores the fact* XD

Thank you! >w<

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celeyo [2009-10-25 02:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha, I love Talori's creepy grin in the second panel. And how Fang almost gets burried under the clones. I bet he likes that a lot~ >:3

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FireflyRaye In reply to celeyo [2009-10-27 04:45:43 +0000 UTC]

lol XD Yes, I bet he does.
Thanks a bunch! *o*

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MiniMiniLena [2009-10-22 19:05:56 +0000 UTC]

lol "there's no way they're all gonna fit in our house."

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FireflyRaye In reply to MiniMiniLena [2009-10-23 13:49:50 +0000 UTC]

XD

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Thanh-the-Mousegirl [2009-10-22 14:48:19 +0000 UTC]

lol. *Fwoom* "Oh crap." Poor Ve learns the hard way that they're impervious to fire. I love the big toothy grins right before they 'chomp' on him, creepy, but funny. ^_^

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KitaeKat [2009-10-22 10:02:34 +0000 UTC]

8D Oh dear. One too many Talori's, and poor Ve he is so DOOMED now.

Bwaah run run away Asura & Cam!!! O3O! *wants them saved*

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DecoraAi [2009-10-22 06:29:32 +0000 UTC]

The 5th panel is so hilarious xD.

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FireflyRaye In reply to DecoraAi [2009-10-22 12:07:02 +0000 UTC]

Yay! XD Thank you!

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DecoraAi In reply to FireflyRaye [2009-10-23 01:46:20 +0000 UTC]

You're really welcome!!

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LadyAniDraws [2009-10-22 03:55:42 +0000 UTC]

Holy s***!!! XDDDDD

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FireflyRaye In reply to LadyAniDraws [2009-10-22 11:46:23 +0000 UTC]

XDDD

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keystripe [2009-10-22 02:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Love how Talori's wings become scorched little demon wings in that last panel XD

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FireflyRaye In reply to keystripe [2009-10-22 13:50:52 +0000 UTC]

lol XD Thanks!

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Bodici22 [2009-10-22 01:56:47 +0000 UTC]

What...the.....


Oh god, she multiplied.

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FireflyRaye In reply to Bodici22 [2009-10-22 02:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Yes... yes she did. XD

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enchanted-raven [2009-10-22 01:41:38 +0000 UTC]

OMG! Talori's faces in panel 2 made me laugh out loud. Creepy creepy smile!

I feel so bad for Ve. ._.'

Also, I have a question about facial expressions. Is Cam's face when she's running away a face of fear or sadness? I'm sorry for asking.

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FireflyRaye In reply to enchanted-raven [2009-10-22 01:46:12 +0000 UTC]

It's more like.... anxiety. XD

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enchanted-raven In reply to FireflyRaye [2009-10-22 01:49:41 +0000 UTC]

Okay, that makes sense! XD

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