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[prev] >>> [next]Oh Rosie, Asura sees right through your tricks. Even if this is the one time you're telling the truth mostly.
Yeah... rabies symptoms show up quick in this comic... which Cam has. XD
This page shouldn't have taken as long as it did. >< But I had to add a panel in at the last minute to create better flow. Betcha can't guess which was the panel added in!
The crazy stuff is starting to happen now. :3 Enjoy!
EDIT: Added some text to the big panel.
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Awsome work on Cam, she's almost hot enough to over look the fact that she's foaming at the mouth, lol. I love Rosie at the bottom. But, Asura responded to Rosie, in a similar manner to what I expected. ^_^ Great work, can't wait to see more.
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RABID CAM IS RABID!
You said in the comments that the crazy stuff is starting to happen now.
So...what was happening up until this point was...normal?
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Uhh... yeah pretty much. XD
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Random rabies!!!
Rabid Cam is quite terrifying. I hope she doesn't give me nightmares. D:
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She won't. As long as you don't go to sleep at night.
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The first page is awesome, but the second one could've been much more dramatic. The composition in the first panel could've been much more exiting and threatening, maybe when using a bird's view and zooming in on her face. Maybe add a panel like tum-TUM-TUUUUMMM!!! if you know what I mean xD;; Adding a climax, since know the climax is coming too quickly. Hope this helps ^^ And looking forward to the crazy stuff 8D
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Eh, the big panel definitely didn't turn out exactly how I wanted. :\
But I was going for something more of like... impending doom, not doomsday just yet. XD (that's the next page)
I added some text though, so hopefully that helps a little. 
Thank you for the critique though!
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Oooh... looking forward to doomsday xD
The text is a good addition 
And you're welcome
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She needs, like, ... 20 shots in her stomach now.
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I think you're forgetting that this is Graph Paper. XD
It'll be solved with pixie dust.
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can it be 20 pixie dust shots in her tummy?
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Uuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes
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Can Graph Paper turn into one of those documentary type zombie movies now? :3
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Only if you sponsor me when it DOES become a for-reals movie.
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....I agree with Asura. Crap! Run, it's a rabid Cam! (I wonder if it will be as bad as normal Cam? o.o)
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lol XD no love for Cam.
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OMG RABIES XD
ahahah poor girl isnt believed
i wonder if they shall BELIEVE once they witness the TRUTH
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