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Published: 2010-07-01 03:17:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 879; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 4
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There's something wrong.But too late.
It's too much for me now.
I can't handle this, everything is falling, crashing in on me.
That's when i stick my head out of the window and lose control.
I can't help it.
Pain and Confusion blocks my mind,
I can't think,
I can't feel,
I can't breathe.
The wind roars into my face, bellowing through my being.
The tears come now, blending into the sky, the stars, the fields--all of it.
I squeeze my eyes shut, drenching myself in blackness.
I can't bare to see it, to accept that this was happening.
But through it all, through the dark, all of it is still there.
It becomes one being, swimming on the breeze,
Laughing in my mind,
Flying with the frozen current of my heart.
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yep, pretty much. But it's fiction,too.
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I thought it was flat out poetry. (free verse)
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true, but not all of its real
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Then it's a....memoir?
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no, becuase memoirs are memories of things that really happened.
this is just one emotion combined with a lot of fantasy. i guess.
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Yeah, so I guess this is a cross over.....
But how is it fantasy?
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because some of it isn't true.
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Then shouldn't that be fiction?
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fiction fantasy. what's the difference?
oh, btw i read "The Hunge Games" I really liked the first part, before Katniss decides to join forces with Peeta. I didn't like the romance. Except for with Gale.Him and Katniss are awesome together.
Team Gale!!
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I'm for team peeta.
And by the way, I don't think we can see avatar.
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i respect your opinion (XD) but i think Peeta is too...i dunno...i dunno. he just doesn't go with katniss well. Gale has everything! Skill, looks, strength, speed, and he's been with katniss since the begining!
yeah, i kind of figured. people say it sucked anyway, so....
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I think Gale looks out for Katniss like a brother. They never really sparked for me. Peeta risked his life and crap, and durring the story, peetaxKatniss had more time to develop, whereas GalexKatniss hasn't.
Well.... for other reasons. But yeah.
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ah, whatever.
oh, that's okay.
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Do you still wanna do something? You know, hang out sometime?
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I dunno. where do you wanna go?
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I....don't really know. How about you?
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I'm not sure. let's look at our options here.
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Ummmmm....borders?
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XD. borders is a great place, and i've been there once, and the only thing i did was sit down and read for about 3 hours. It was fun. I dunno. The closest borders to us is in the kenwood mall, i think.
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Haha, me and my brother go to Borders all the time just to sit down and read miscellaneous things. It's pretty fun, also a good place to meet up.
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that's cool!
it is, i agree.
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Hey, do you know where east gate is?
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Maybe we could meet up somewhere there?
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dunno...do you want to?
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Yeah, sure....but where?
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I dunno...um...another book store, perhaps?
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Hmmmm.....
Well, we live half and hour away from each other, so surely we can find a familiar land mark in between which takes only 15 minutes to get too....
DARN IT! This is when I wish I could drive. ;_;
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Huh. What about...a park.
lolz, yeah, but i can ride a bike! some mode of independent transportation, anyway.
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What park do you know of?
D: Yeah, but to where? Unless your local shoping street, or where ever you guys hang is somewhere close, I don't see the use. XD
Plus walking gives you more of a work out.
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I dunno. you?
that's true...hm...
but riding your bike is more fun.
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Uhhhh....Sharon park?
True, true.
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You mean sharon woods?
Just the thrill of pedaling and feeling the wind in your face...cars zooming by...it's fun.
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Yeah. XD I fail.
I guess that's true. But not really in my neighborhood. I think walking is alot better... you get to scope out the world more and absord the details instead of zooming past it.
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Haha. i go there for cross country practice on monday tuesdays and fridays.
Ah, i see. i like them both. if you want to go fast, hop on a bike, if you want to think and reflect and observe, walk. hey, what do you do when you're overwhelmed with school work?
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Is it brutal? And are you actually getting faster? 9like, is it working?)
Well, when I'm overwhelmed, I usually chill out to my music, procrastinate till the last moment or simply set my priorities straight, giving me ocassional breaks but a reasonable plan to finish my homework and get on with my life, but only in my most productive mood. Why?
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Yeah, it sucks. He pushes us so hard, like, after a 10 minute warm-up, I can't do anything. No, listen: TODAY, first you go there, then you run a half mile warm up, then you stretch, partner stretch, leg swings--THEN you go to this grassy place by the actual building. there are these holes and uneven grounds and we have leg drills on those. I hate it. When we do the back pedal, it feels like i'm about to trip. then we had announcements, THEN we do a 10 minute warning, and after that, we do this really dumb "sprint for 4, jog for 2" thing 3 times, and he divided us into 3 groups, okay? fastest in the first, slowest in three. So i was in the third group with some of my friends, only i was last (as usual) and we had to split up. so it was three of us walking, and the other four were still doing it. after that we have ab excersises and strides. only i left early today so i didn't them. strides aren't that bad, you just run 90 yards with good form, and everyone does it together. you rest for 30 seconds and then do it 3 more times. In soccer, it's much, much worse. I went to try-outs, and we had to sprint 90 yards in 15 seconds. they were counting down, too. and you have to come back in 30 seconds, then rest for 15. 10 times. It sounds easy, but it's not. Like, i was running back the 30 second, and she'd already signaled for them to start the 15. It sucked. Yeah, cc works, my mom says i got thinner, but i really don't like all the work we have to do. and the coach is SO serious about practice. Like, you won't come one day and he'll just...get SOOO mad. I'm serious.
Yeah, i know what you mean, just sink into your music. Because i have this stupid summer assignment to do, and i don't want to do it.
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....Sounds....pretty....brutal. To say the least. Well, atleast you're getting healthier? Swimming is just as brutal too... well, are there atleast any friends in your class? Why don't you just try jump roping for 10 minutes? That will really make you shape up in no time, and plus much more convenient.
Well, you should prolly just do a little bit a day, so you're not overwhelmed, personally, I'd have done it as soon as possible to gt it over with.
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I know. In soccer they call that sprinting thing "15 seconds of fun."
More like torture.
I guess i'm getting healthier. Swimming is fun, though! See, i haven't swum (swam, swimmed, whatever) in quite a long time, and today we went on this conue trip for cc, the boys and girls, and so we all had life jackets on, and it felt so good to be in the water. Of course, i probably wouldn't have gotten that wet, but some jerk kept on tipping us over. It went kind of like this:
"I won't flip you guys," he swam past the girls in front of us, then his eyes glint when he sees us, "but them, I might."
He approached us.
"No, dude, no, don't-"
Tip.
Angry splashes and coughs as we fall into the river, laughter too, because no matter how much it's annoying, it's still pretty fun. XD. and then my friend came over and did it too. that went kind of like this:
She was a pretty fast swimmer, so she was near us in no time, already out of her boat, grinning.
"Alora, please, don't you dare--"
She tipped us anyway.
"You're welcome!" she called, as we spout water and cough, flailing above the surface.
Alora's really nice; we were laughing together while flailing above the surface.
And you know that guy who tipped us the first time? He did it again with one of his friends, claiming to "we're not going to do it. We're just trying to get straight here," bumping into our canoe.
His friend pushed the boat over.
It was in the shallow, rocky part too by the rapids, so our knees scraped against the bottom, and that hurt. Haha, but we were okay. It was fun, I guess. Lunch was almost finished when we reached the ending.
Yeah, i have a couple friends in it; and i suggested the jump roping thing to my mom, but she said i wouldn't do it. which i probabaly would have, anything to not do cc.
Yeah i probabaly should...but it's so boring. seriously? I never do things on the first nights they're assigned, unlike someone i'm talking to. Well, typing to.
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It's swam.
Bwahahaha~! That must have been fun. I woulda taken a picture of it!
Wait, you guys were in rapids? I thought it was a pool. O.O
Haha, well that sounds like fun. I'm glad.
XD Somehow, I sense your mom is telling a bit of truth. After all, Jump roping for 10 minutes is really tough.
Well, hey. What can I say? I my be a procrastinator when it comes to personal things....but I just want to get academics over with. What is your summer homework?
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Ah, well.
Haha, yeah, but I don't have a camera, and the coaches told us not to bring phones because "plenty of phones have been lost on the river." Nah, we were in the little miami.
Yeah I know. Is it hard? do you do it?
haha, yes, so it seems. I have to read 3 chapters out of a huge book, then take notes on them (economic, social, religious, political) then put it together and write an essay. then take a 100 point test in the first week of school.
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XD Oh. Little miami is always a fun river. c:
Well, my brother did and he got into great shape, but he said, it's very tough.
That's not too bad. I could do that in a day. =.=' You're just being a procrastinator. You should hurry up and complete the assignment.
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i know
yeah, i can imagine. my brother got this weighted jump rope. it's interesting
IT IS BAD! the book is so confusin!! I'm trying. but when i'm hungry, i can't concentrate.
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I see.
Well... take note on what generally happens so you get the gist of it.
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Yeah....i'm trying. i even asked my brother to high light some important stuff while i was busy, and he ended up high lighting "early october". XD.
the notes aren't supposed to include fic. characters, only developemetns of political, social, etc.etc.
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Yeah, but if you understand the basics... then you can expand into details such as the ideas. Underlining helps. Believe me...I've had to read shakespeare.
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True...true...true.. yeah, that's right.
Shakespeare? ooh, was it tough?
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Shakespeare wasn't that tough....although it was because we had the teacher to help us along and some translations....when we worked on it by ourselves....we had to use context clues and such to get the gist of it.
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