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Firewarrior117 — Disgaea comic 40
Published: 2012-01-26 06:08:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 835; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 19
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The 40th one in the series.The Group finally gets back together, and meets up with the Rebels in the Process, with Travis hurt, and Overlord in control of the Pyramid, and Akimoto's smarts, both groups have devised a plan.
You guys like Bellydancers? CUZ KRYS IS ABOUT TO BE ONE!
Yeah, yeah, Your welcome...c:
Anyway yeah, enjoy!
....OH MY GOD SOUL CALIBUR 5 COMES OUT TUESDAY!
A bad habit of mine is grammar, let me know if you see any misspellings.:c
I DO NOT OWN DISGAEA OR PHANTOM BRAVE OR THE LOGO.
All characters/Disgaea/Phantom Brave/Logo/NIS America.
Sprites/Spriters resource/ Crimson penguin.
Backgrounds/Super Mario RPG/Nintendo/Soul Nomad/NIS America.
Krystal/Ashura/vincent/Karma/Sakiko/
Akimoto/Fiona/Vent/ME.
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Here are some basic sprites! There's a ton of white space...Sorry! Those are basically the starters. I'm making more asap, but if this is good enough I wanted to hand 'em to ya~
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Yeah they're cool, I could totally put her in the Background sometime!C:
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Cool! ^^ I'll have more later.
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I wasn't gonna say anything, but since you asked to point out grammar problems. You used "your" where it should have been "you're" in a few places. "your a human" "your in a long hallway" and "your my little brother" should all be "you're." Every instance after that is good though. You're definitely getting better with it.
Also, this is hilarious. I have a sneaking suspicion Aki is doing this on purpose...
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Of COURSE he's doing it on purpose!XD
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Aw, boo. If you'd wanted a bellydancer, you should have talked to me; Archi's been itching to break out his old costume and put on a show again. He's got great legs, and his form is simply to die for~
Nicely done as usual! Your writing is definitely improving. If you ever want someone to help proofread your script, I'd be happy to help.
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Umm, no thanks. I've already been scarred by OOT Redeads, I don't need anymore scarring thank you...:C
Thanks.c:
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Trubbol: Tonbo, your glowing.
Spirit Tonbo: I know
Trubbol: Can I glow?
Spirit Tonbo: No
Trubbol: *curls up into depression mode*
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pffft, Another one bites the Pyramid.XD
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POOR KRYSTAL HAS TO SUFFER DUE TO AKIS STRANGE FETISHES.
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Yep, He's just doing this to Nosebleed, though somehow it does end up working.c:
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