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Published: 2011-10-20 03:44:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 23143; Favourites: 478; Downloads: 543
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So I've made some noticeable changes to the original sketch. The least of which being that the guard got a complete sex change. Also cabbages.I dropped the ball hard on the background. It might be subject to change in the future, but I'm pretty happy with all the lines and colors on the people.
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HOW DID I MISS THIS.
I love your style, 1st2nd. Katara is freakin' gorgeous in this one and you included my very favorite minor recurring character.
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But it was already said .... it was the title.
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....... derp.
Anyways, nice piece. The proportions on all the characters are balanced, and the dialogue is at a good pace. Nice work!
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Twas actually Sapphire Fire.
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They're pretty much the same size, the officer is just much taller.
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Love the female fire. Don't know how the Fire Nation could lose the war with such muscular females fighting for them. Also I noticed some veins on Toph's arms. Keep up the nice muscle works bro.
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I'd guess the rest of the world would have just as many ripped ladies. But that war wasn't decided by brute force in the end anyway.
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This is just priceless!
I might have dreamt it, but didn't they once portray Toph as being buff on the show, by having her being played by a really buff actor (most likely a guy) in a play?
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She was originally supposed to be a guy, and that version in Ember Island Players was very similar to her original concept. Luckily, someone convinced the creators that making her into a girl would be a better idea, and now we have Toph.
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Woaaaa! It's a good start point for a comic series. This team with your larger and taller amazon against some smaller bad boys. The guy could be one of the team too. You got the point. Thanks
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No plans for this to be a comic. They're not my characters.
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Is it bad I'm focusing more on the cabbage guy? :V
Honestly though, I'm really liking the sizes here, very well done muscles. The only issue I have is with the bump in the back of the knees. It seems a bit too sudden, if you know what I mean. Like, instead of a smooth leg, it just suddenly has a giant bump coming out.
But I know nothing of anatomy, so take what I say with a shitload of salt. :V
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Oh god, I don't even know if its what you're talking about, but I just realized I've got the angles wrong on her calves.
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I love the gender role reversal feeling, having three big girls and one skinny man who looks like the "harassed" one (to the huge female officer at least!)
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Hey, if there's a story in there you're liking, I'm not gonna stop ya.
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If the King approves, my work is done.
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I always like your colored pictures.
Your point about the 'Fire Nation has muscle-y ladies' is a lot more illustrated when such a lady is displayed! I like that indulgent look she has; sort of seems like she's saying, 'now come on, be fair to the wussy guy'.
(Apparently, she has not heard the tales of Wang Fire, HERO OF THE FIRE NATION!)
Katara is still my favorite in this picture; she just looks so cute when she's that buff. (Wonder how Aang feels about her buff-ness?)
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I had thought about adding him in to the scene, doing something silly or nonchalant in the background. I obviously didn't do it, but I think Aang would like Katara no matter how big she was.
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Thanks, though the characters turned out far better than the rest of it.
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^^ I think the back ground is good as well ^^ and wow I didn't even notice the guards different look at first till I went back and looked.. he he.. I loved it.. it made me laugh so hard when I finally saw it. ^^
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I imagine this would be several years before "Pose Off" I like to think of her as an adult at that point.
This... Is a good start.
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This is pretty much awesome. I really see no issue with the background, if it's too detailed it can sometimes take attention away from the focus.
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Like a lot of things I do, there are areas that received attention and care. Then there are others where I just said "FUCK IT! I'll fix it in post."
But thanks!
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Them cabbages is cursed. CURSED I TELLS YA!
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Oh how I adore thee, Jodie Foster.
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please keep at it with the muscular girls. ur good at it
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Thanks! I plan to keep at them, try to balance out everything I put up.
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Cabbage!
And yeah, I can see how you're happy. The lines and color on the people do look quite nice, mate. C:
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Why thank you. I need to get better at backgrounds.
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