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Published: 2009-02-22 05:09:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 3992; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 0
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So uhm... this is part of a project by: , the idea is to revamp a retro show. So I choose Dungeons and Dragons.
First character to revamp: Hank. The leader of the group and the oldest. For the revamp I was thinking of him as a surfer dude, who just moved to town, kinda hippie, caring and kind-hearted. He looks a little upset, but that's because he's sort of "boy-scout-protective" with his party.
Here is my revamp version of Hank, the Ranger.
In case you wonder... this is the original character--->[link]
The original Hank, the ranger is property of Marvel comics and TSR, or whoever the owners are.
but the revamp ideas are mine muahahaha.
Bobby & Uni: The Barbarian & The Unicorn --->[link]
Diana: The Acrobat --->[link]
Eric: The Cavalier --->[link]
If you like my art, please help me with a or some
the paper texture is property of: --->[link]
DUDE!!! like: AWESOME!!!, this piece was featured here ---> [link]
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i would like a story with these designs in it
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are you going to pick thus up again one day
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Digging the Celtic theme here, very effective.
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I was working on her, but... my brained drained from ideas!
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Welcome
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hahahah yeah kilts rock!
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este serΓa algo parecido a mi ranger, pero con cabello negro xD
De hecho, no me gusta que use armadura porque siempe me limita mi Dex! D=<
siempre le subo el dex cuando toca subΓrselo, asΓ que tengo un beautiful modificador de +10!!!! hahahaha
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uhm... bueno, yo le puse la armadura pro que considerΓ© que se veΓa "fashion" pero creo que por practicidad... si e reducirΓa Dex.
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it's hard to critique something that is clearly stylized, because i don't know what is intended or not, lol, but let me start by saying i like it.
my only two critiques aren't major things, just little tweeks. his right foot seems awkwardly tilted, it should probably be foreshortened a bit, pointing more towards the viewer, given how his legs are standing.
also, the armor on his left shoulder, the way u shaded it, it kind of appears to be too curved almost, in a way where it looks like it's actually curving into his body.
like i said, hard to critique on anatomy or anything due to stylization, beyond what i said already, but i like it, good stuff
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WOW thanks, I ahevn't noticed about the feet.
Yeah the armour thingy... hahaha long story, I'm not so good at shading metal, but gonna try harder for the next time
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well, the metal itself is shaded fine, it's just a little to dark, so it's more of a shading issue not specific to metal, if the the angle were different it'd be fine, lol.
yeah, i have problems with feet too, so i look for it in my own stuff so i pick up on them in other peoples quick, haha.
like i said, good piece overall, just a few little things to watch out for in general, hope they help!
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yes, it was a very good critique. Thanks!!!
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not a problem, glad i could help. i'm actually doing this every tuesday now, so if you're interested, send me a note next time with links to pieces you'd want critiques for. i can definatly always get everyone one piece, but i still gotta go through notes ppl sent, haha, and sleep eventually.
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good loke with that dude, that's really nice from you!!!
Yeah get some sleep hahaha
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haha, i do what i can
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