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Published: 2005-04-21 05:36:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 111
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Description Eyes are opened to the sky
Artificial wisps never die.

Sips of blue –- flicker black
A day will dawn – we won’t come back.

We chug the lukewarm nuzzling heat
And slowly flounder to tattered defeat.

A gleaming beginning we left behind –
The glassy syrup we will never find.

Supple Nature gobbled and used
Our amending chance – swished and refused.

With more and more, we embrace
Rashly crinkling out planet’s face.

Scarlet noise rinse her bare.
With polluted flames – we never care.

Her velvet prairies wailing and frayed
The writhing retort of our decay.

The world on fire in molten blight
Everyday a fateless fight.

                                   Life will dusk – ink will flare
                           The waning wings of what was once there.
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Comments: 2

jessichu [2005-09-18 22:53:31 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely amazing.

I'm trying to pick out my favorite part of Waning World and simply can't.
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I love every part of it.

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flappability In reply to jessichu [2005-09-24 01:11:19 +0000 UTC]

Yay! You deserve the fluffy honor of being the first person to comment! Yay!

This is probably the third poem I submitted to dA... I wrote it in third and fourth period during school I think. Yeah.

It's nifty how inspiration could just hop into your brain and how it makes you drag your pencil, and pour your concentration on just that like nothing else mattered. Even surrounded by a pile of people in class. =/

Anyways, thanks for reading again!

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