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Published: 2016-04-11 17:29:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 22079; Favourites: 287; Downloads: 228
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An idea I thought would be fun. I'm pretty terrible with fantasy name so I sort of just went with the first thing I though of.Image from the game Shingeki no Bahamut
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p-l-richards [2016-04-17 21:18:20 +0000 UTC]
Very good and very enjoyable fantasy feminisation. There are some lovely ironic touches here - he thinks he's going to be sacrificed, but the goblins have other ideas However, '...pretty terrible with fantasy names...'? If you're going to do this at all regularly you need to think up some exotic-sounding names. It's part of the fun! 'Goblina' isn't too bad, but 'they were talking in broken English'? No, it's broken whatever-the-local-language-is. Beings don't talk English in this sort of fantasy, it's just translated into English for your readers! But that aside, this was fun and skilfully written. Good work
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msflurker [2016-04-12 06:42:14 +0000 UTC]
The voice of this is pretty good, especially the use of ironic echoes you have.
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flashkill455 In reply to msflurker [2016-04-14 22:06:41 +0000 UTC]
It was sort of a last minute thing really. Wasn't sure how to end.
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msflurker In reply to flashkill455 [2016-04-14 22:14:35 +0000 UTC]
Well, that doesn't change that it helped make it better m^_^m
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HeelLana [2016-04-11 18:50:05 +0000 UTC]
I used to be an adventurer like you but I took a rune to body.
Or something like that.
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