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Description My next page of Wolf Wears Wool may be delayed because of a combination of plans swallowing up the rest of my week-end and because I received a smack to the face from the glove of THIS thing.

Fittingly enough, a lot of anguish went into this picture (aside from the fact that my first time reading the ending of the actual book saw me spending half of my day half-sobbing like a little bitch with a skinned knee). In the book, Dickens describes Sydney as holding the hand(s) of the seamstress as they are in the queue, and that he turns her away so that she is not facing the guillotine . . . And all but one of the illustrations I have seen of this scene depict him with his hands tied behind. This would make sense (albiet be even more awkward), if the seamstress didn't go before him in the queue. If they were clasping one another's hands behind them and thus facing opposite directions, he'd have to turn her so that she were behind him and he'd actually be next in the queue . . . Oh, my brain hurts . . . And having to dissect that scene any more will make it lose its full flavour and impact . . .

At any rate, I rationalised it by saying that their hands are bound in front until they are untied to have their outer garments removed (which they were, sources say), after which, their hands were bound behind, before stepping up to the platform.

. . . Owww . . . Now my heart hurts.

I think I'm explaining all of this firstly because I have a feeling that it will come into question and above all else, I wanted to do this scene justice. It has been said that this scene from A Tale Of Two Cities is one of the most finely crafted in English Literature. This is, in my experience, both understatement and fact. It is also said that few fictional characters are as wept over as Sydney Carton. I can also attest to the veracity of this claim.

So, yer, until I can unearth my Ouija Board from my storage unit for to verify the front-or-back hand binding bungle with old Dickens himself, I hope you can content yourself with . . . I dunno, the atmosphere I was trying to capture.

. . . And of course, if you haven't, read the book for yourselves.
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Comments: 19

RD-DD1843 [2018-11-24 13:32:08 +0000 UTC]

Dickens' artistic peak is probably (except for "David Copperfield" and "Bleak House") in the years 1858 to 1861 when first he writes "A Tale of Two Cities" and then he writes "Great Expectations".  I think they are the least flawed of his novels, and have the best writing).  

I always felt that Dickens intended the reader to feel that Sydney's last moments alive with the seamstress were meant to suggest some post-execution hope.  I'm not sure Dickens ever believed in an afterlife, but I suspected that as he was sacrificing so much to save so many (Lucy, Charles, their daughter, Dr. Manette) from probable doom, he was actually suggesting that if there is a life after death Sydney finds his in the little seamstress.  But like so much else in good literature it allows the reader to make up his or her own mind.  I'd like to think he did.   

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TheLittle1 [2017-04-05 04:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful. 

I am rehearsing as the Seamstress right now and attempting to control the feels.  You captured the moment so well. 

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WiseGirl15 [2015-02-05 09:35:17 +0000 UTC]

There go my feelings. This is beautiful

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TheDagmar [2014-02-11 03:04:21 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely beautiful.

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Puppetcancer [2013-07-05 22:01:12 +0000 UTC]

I recently finished Dickens' tale, and I really appreciate your choice of title and well as the drawing itself. Good work at capturing the mood of that final chapter.

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daisyofthenight [2013-05-23 23:01:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh. I just finished Tale of Two Cities this afternoon during lunch and cried. Then I had to go to my world history class, and my teacher made a joke about me crying because of the presentations in class. I replied with Tale of Two Cities feelings. We shared a look, and no more was said.

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MadeAnAngelNow [2012-12-14 03:25:05 +0000 UTC]

This must have taken forever to do. It's absolutely beautiful. And I agree, ATOTC is definitely one of the most masterful pieces of literature of all time.

But I must say, when I read the book...

...I didn't cry for Sydney. I cried for Mme. Defarge. She was so full of life, so...untouchable, invincible, the unstoppable force that finally met the immovable object. I was just waiting, the whole book, for someone to reach out to her, for her redemption - and then Prossie went and shot her.

Now I'm going to cry again.

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TSiLvY [2012-11-30 15:09:20 +0000 UTC]

I can attest the veracity as well!
There are a lot of beautifully poignant scenes in the book, as the one where Sidney declares humself to Lucie, and a lot more.

This is a gorgeous work! I love how the people on the guillotine are faceless and the whole mood is very faithful to the book. Also, the lighting, to me it reflects perfectly Sidney's thoughts at the end of the book, which, even if most of us were crying our eyes of on at the moment of reading, are not that sad, and mainly full of hope. Here I see clearly that hope as if I'm reading it now, and you've rendered it perfectly in your work. It's touching.

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TonithePirate [2012-11-24 03:43:37 +0000 UTC]

I tried to read this scene to my mom a few weeks ago and it didn't turn out to well This captures it so well; it's so simple, and yet it wouldn't work any other way. Perfect.

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Euroseth [2012-06-09 03:10:23 +0000 UTC]

I absolutely love the lighting and the overall atmosphere in this- it captures the scene perfectly. I'm not one to cry easily at the hands of written literature, but I will admit that I came damn near close at this point in the book. @____@ Excellent job, either way!

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fleebites In reply to Euroseth [2012-06-15 07:26:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh . . . When I read the end, I felt as though I might cry tears like white-hot bullets. So manly of me.
I am so glad my wee drawing of that horrendously powerful scene could please you! Many thanks!

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Euroseth In reply to fleebites [2012-06-16 13:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Very manly, indeed. And no problem, you're welcome!

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DrHackey [2012-06-08 23:05:29 +0000 UTC]

This is the saddest part of the book! I love it! Good job!

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fleebites In reply to DrHackey [2012-06-15 07:27:35 +0000 UTC]

It is INDEED. I quite nearly watered my route to work with tears after I finished it during breakfast.
Glad you like my humble drawing Thanka!

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Enoa79 [2012-06-02 20:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work. Shade and light are very good.

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fleebites In reply to Enoa79 [2012-06-15 07:27:54 +0000 UTC]

So glad you approve! I did try very hard

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Enoa79 In reply to fleebites [2012-06-17 19:32:26 +0000 UTC]

The result is worth the efforts.

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aquarys [2012-05-27 00:16:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, love the lighting here.

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fleebites In reply to aquarys [2012-05-30 03:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was going for atmosphere more than anything else, and the lighting was a major facet of that. I'm glad I didn't arse it up entirely

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