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fleurescience β€” Mr. Jefferson

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Published: 2016-07-18 16:53:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 256; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 3
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Description I'm really not happy with how this turned out, but I thought I'd upload it anyway since I took the time to complete it. Ehh I just think I got the proportions/shape/perspective of everything on his face completely wrong. Oh well, everyone has crappy art days, right?
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pzreich24 [2016-07-24 03:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey there! This is a really nice piece of art, I love the colours! Would you like some advice about proportions in general because I would be happy to help you there. You are definitely off to a fantastic start! :3

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fleurescience In reply to pzreich24 [2016-07-24 08:03:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And sure, I'm always looking to improve, any advice you can give me will be very helpful

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pzreich24 In reply to fleurescience [2016-07-24 20:48:11 +0000 UTC]

So the eyes are actually well proportioned, but the deviance from normal facial features happen with the nose and mouth. With most european features (structure changes a little over ethnicities, but generally follow the same pattern) the nose fall higher on the face and more out. A good tip for 3/4 view (the one you have) is to match the tip of the nose to both the pupil of the 'hidden' eye and the bottom of the nose to the last quarter of the ear. The jaw in this drawing is also very undersized. Remember that as evil Jefferson is, he still need both sets of teeth and a jawline. The distance from the chin to the top lip should match the top lip to the brow bone. In the game, his forehead is also a tiny bit taller, but that doesn't matter so much. I hope this helps and I implore you to continue art and keep up the fantastic work.

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fleurescience In reply to pzreich24 [2016-07-24 21:48:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! They are some really helpful tips and I'm definitely going to refer back to your comment next time I try out a portrait I really appreciate the help! I'll keep what you've said in mind and carry on practicingΒ Β  it's great having a fresh set of eyes on your work to see where you can improve!

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pzreich24 In reply to fleurescience [2016-08-08 11:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Of course! I am glad I was of use :33

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